Almost zero World development story development is not good I hope too see better development in the story, world and writing style All the best!
Sparksbee
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Novel is still in Introduction and main Character is just 13 years old kid he is still in school novel main plot starts in 2 more chapters
Bruh! In 25 chapter you want world development and story development,why not ask author to just write an essay with summary of whole story of novel.ATLEAST wait for 70 chapters.