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😭😭😭 Not gonna lie, she is stupid and it's sad but atleast she knows?
Kidnapping is a big issue, why would her parents hide that from her, memory or no memory especially since it could happen again? Isn't the whole point her safety. Also if she was kidnapped and didn't remember or pretending not to remember shouldn't her parents carry her to get help?
The writing is getting dumb because she shouldn't need to ask his permission to go shopping whether she is staying at his house or not. Its also very strange she will go and live with an older man who is her boss whom she knows nothing much about that insults her after her house is trashed whether or not he is going to fire her. There's a lot of missing loops. Also she acts very juvenile. The mannerisms and behaviour is giving child. It's giving 13 yr old instead of someone who is grown.