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BeeInAPan

BeeInAPan

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Hello! I'm Bee or BeeInAPan! I write LGBTQIA+ stories! Most stories I write are original so don't steal my work.

2022-06-14 JoinedUnited States
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  • BeeInAPan
    BeeInAPan2 years ago
    Posted

    Love the drama at the beginning! The system is my favorite part honestly though! It's comical when it brings up death to the host! Keep up the good work!

  • BeeInAPan
    BeeInAPan2 years ago
    Posted

    I love the medieval setting and the character design. The characters and kingdoms names are very unique and it's written very well! Keep up the good work!

  • BeeInAPan
    BeeInAPan2 years ago
    Posted

    I don't commonly read novels of people in our world but I like he detail about how the character feels. The emotionless thoughts are a great add!

  • BeeInAPan
    BeeInAPan2 years ago
    Posted

    Amazing book! The writing is very neat and detailed and love the perspective of someone who doesn't know anything about themselves. Keep up the good work!

  • BeeInAPan
    BeeInAPan2 years ago
    Posted

    Personally I'm an Athiest so I don't usually read books with gods. I like how it starts with instant drama but the writing quality isn't very good. Keep up the good work though!

  • BeeInAPan
    BeeInAPan2 years ago
    Posted

    Not a fan of romance novels but it's very good! I love some action and murder when I read! I love different universes and worlds when I read! It gives me lots of imagination! Keep up the good work!

  • BeeInAPan
    BeeInAPan2 years ago
    Posted

    I'm not very much into romance but that's just me. It also needs more detail. Everything goes by too quickly and I can't comprehend what's going on. Otherwise a very good read!

  • BeeInAPan
    BeeInAPan2 years ago
    Posted

    Love the crime aspect, the names are unique as well! maybe make your sentences longer as well as your chapters! But otherwise this is definitely going into my library!

  • BeeInAPan
    BeeInAPan2 years ago
    Posted

    Another BL story! Can't get enough of them! Love how it starts out with drama but could need more detail and explanation on what goes on. Keep up the good work!

  • BeeInAPan
    BeeInAPan2 years ago
    Posted

    I'm not a huge fan of romance and love novels but it is written very well! A few spelling mistakes but other than that, it's very detail and eye catching!