Martian_falcon

The beginning is good ........... I think it would be a very good plot .............. Just continue with this creativity ........... 👏👏👏

The story is great with a good beginning as well ..............this novel is really worth my time Just continue with this creativity 👏👏👏👏

The story is good and the plot is also good, also a great book Complete at this creativity.. A wonderful book worth reading ...............

What is the stand? What is the stand? I can't wait 🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆

Good story. Fast events .............. The chapter is short But, I loved the story.............. You must keep going..............................

good

good

Boring at first but much improved now I liked how the character developed The events are fast I also liked talking about the present and the past at the same time Rate it Well, maybe not five But I'll put five anyway

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Thanks man Wait and i will complete