Tani_Nick

Maybe to look after the children and do nothing else? The lady seems like someone who would want to help out .

Not sure about this attitude

I mean, he was with her for a while, and they developed a relationship. I believe it's human nature to ask of him after not seeing him after a major incident. This may be Justin's way of alleviating her worries by allowing her to see him before he goes away forever. On the other hand, you could be right that there would be something more.

Don't want to ne a wet blanket, but was John just forgotten?

Also, to partial.

Maybe her mom is not really dead?

I understand your need for proper grammar, sentence structure. spelling, etc. However, American English Language?

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Didn't she already tell her friend that he would do precisely this? Have people follow her?