Woah woah (in terms of grammar) that’s looking real dark seraph

It’s here

Nvm

Wasn’t that “I guess you can’t see me”?

In the time you released 15 DNO chapters you only updated 2-3, I understand that you don’t want your book to die, but please at least update 1/3 the amount of books you release. I often check to see if a new chapter was updated, only to find out that yet another DNO chapter was released it really sucks

I don’t like liars

I'm pleased to know you appreciated my review of your novel! Your remarkable skill in engaging readers through your storytelling is outstanding, and your unwavering commitment to your readers, demonstrated by consistent updates and special chapters, is laudable. I am excited to continue exploring your work and unveiling the fresh narratives you create for us. Keep up the fantastic work!

Reincarnation Of The Strongest Spirit Master by Ranmaro is a delightful and engaging novel that skillfully weaves an interesting story, capturing readers' attention from beginning to end. The author's ability to maintain a consistent and stable update schedule is commendable, which keeps the reader anticipating the next chapter with excitement. The book is written with great attention to detail, resulting in minimal grammatical errors. This level of polish adds to the reader's enjoyment as it allows for a smooth and uninterrupted reading experience. Additionally, the inclusion of privileged chapters as a reward for dedicated readers is a thoughtful touch and demonstrates the author's appreciation for their loyal fanbase. As a reader, I am eager to explore other works by this talented author, given the high-quality storytelling displayed in this novel. However, it is important to note that the pacing of the story may not be suitable for everyone. The narrative unfolds at a relatively slow pace, with minimal time skips, and provides a complete and thorough account of the events. Personally, I appreciate this approach, as it allows for a more immersive experience. Nonetheless, this may be a matter of personal preference, and some readers might prefer a faster-paced story. In conclusion, Reincarnation Of The Strongest Spirit Master is an enthralling novel that showcases Ranmaro's storytelling prowess. With its captivating plot, polished writing, and unique pacing, this book is a must-read for those who enjoy a well-crafted and immersive story. Despite the relatively slow pace, it is a testament to the author's skill in creating a novel that can cater to a diverse audience. I highly recommend giving this book a read and exploring the other works by Ranmaro.

As previously mentioned, there's a possibility that he doesn't want to disclose the information. Even the top-tier sects have only one heaven realm cultivation technique. As to how the information could be leaked or stolen, it could be due to a foolish disciple or a spy from another sect who infiltrated the dao sect.

In mythology, the Aufhocker (Low German Huckup, Sorbian Bubak) is a kobold-like pressure spirit who jumps on the shoulders or back of hikers who are still out and about at night and becomes heavier with every step. [Wikipedia] Please at least Google once before you say something you don’t know…

A Compelling Novel with Missed Opportunities in Story Development The novel under review, set in a vividly imagined medieval world, presents a gripping storyline and well-developed characters that make for an overall enjoyable reading experience. However, it is not without its flaws. The story development takes an unfortunate turn at the end of the first volume, as pivotal decisions made by the author on behalf of the characters seem to lack coherence and emotional resonance. One such decision involves the treatment of Rachel, a crucial character in the narrative. The choice to abandon her and label her as a monster, as dictated by the author, is not only heart-wrenching but also conflicts with the promise made to her and her father. This betrayal not only shatters Rachel's trust but also seems to be an unnecessary plot device that detracts from the emotional impact of the story. An alternative path that the protagonist could have considered would have been to take Rachel with them when escaping from the clutches of the crown prince. This course of action might have prevented the devastating consequences that followed, such as Rachel losing one of her flower petals and a significant amount of life. Additionally, the choice to betray Rachel has far-reaching implications, as it strains the relationship between two influential families and potentially the imperial family as well. The King might choose to side with Leriana's father, a close friend. This alliance is likely to start a feud with Rachel's father over the broken promise, further intensifying the conflict surrounding their families, which could lead to much bloodshed, as they control half the military of the empire. While the novel's overall quality is commendable, the storyline at the end of the first volume, and subsequently all volumes thereafter, could have benefitted from more thoughtful development by the author. By exploring alternative paths for the characters and maintaining consistency in their actions, the narrative would have been more engaging and emotionally satisfying. Nonetheless, readers who appreciate intricate plotlines and rich character development will still find much to enjoy in this fascinating tale. The novel leaves us questioning the author's choices, but eager to see how the story unfolds in subsequent volumes. Total score 3.4, because all criteria except story development are good. Suggested Revision: A simple solution to address this issue could be to alter the protagonist's actions towards Rachel. Instead of explicitly calling her a monster, the protagonist could choose to leave without saying anything. As a result, the events surrounding the loss of Rachel's flower petal could unfold differently. For instance, Rachel might feel betrayed because the protagonist left without an explanation, or someone else could spread lies about the protagonist's reasons for leaving, leading to a more reasonable portrayal of the protagonist's actions. This adjustment could strengthen the emotional resonance of the story and maintain the protagonist's integrity.

Suggested Revision: A simple solution to address this issue could be to alter the protagonist's actions towards Rachel. Instead of explicitly calling her a monster, the protagonist could choose to leave without saying anything. As a result, the events surrounding the loss of Rachel's flower petal could unfold differently. For instance, Rachel might feel betrayed because the protagonist left without an explanation, or someone else could spread lies about the protagonist's reasons for leaving, leading to a more reasonable portrayal of the protagonist's actions. This adjustment could strengthen the emotional resonance of the story and maintain the protagonist's integrity.

A Disappointing Dive into Harem Fantasy with an Unlikable Protagonist and Incoherent Narrative I typically avoid harem-style books, but I don't believe they're inherently without merit. If approached with a logical, even scientific perspective (e.g., strong animals often have multiple mates due to evolutionary pressures), it's possible to create an engaging alternate world where humans follow similar patterns. Unfortunately, this book fails to deliver a compelling narrative or a likable protagonist, and suffers from an incoherent plotline. The protagonist is transmigrated into a world where he has a unique system, locked until his 18th birthday. Despite the countdown indicating when it will be unsealed, he still expresses dissatisfaction with his current situation, unfairly blaming the system for his lack of strength and not having more wives. This is particularly off-putting considering his likely origin from a world similar to ours, where having multiple partners is not the norm. His dissatisfaction, when he already has at least two wives/concubines, is a clear sign of perverted greed. In this world, attaining a Buddha-like status is assumed to be rare. However, even if this were true, it doesn't justify the protagonist's selfishness and lack of appreciation for what he has. His inability to value his current relationships and his constant desire for more make him an unsympathetic character that readers will struggle to root for. The narrative also suffers from incoherence and inconsistency. The protagonist is supposedly a godly farmer, yet his farming skills are all battle-related. Instead of planting crops, he acquires plants that either grant him combat skills or function as weapons. The author provides him with a full set of armor and various weapons, which is nonsensical for a farmer character. Furthermore, the exaggerated names for his farming-based skills, such as Supreme Father, God of War, and Beast God, only add to the confusion and undermine the story's potential. In conclusion, this book disappoints on multiple fronts: an unlikable protagonist, narrative inconsistencies, and an incoherent plotline. The exploration of harem dynamics is far from engaging, and I cannot recommend this read. My rating is a disheartening 0/10. (The actual rating is better, because the Translation Quality doesn't suck)

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Hmmm, oddly specific…

No, but I though it was important for the story to mention that the character doesn’t have a gender, think about it like being above genders like a god

I already changed that in the main bio, but I forgot to change it here as well ^_^|||