I have to stop reading this after 154 chapters or so. I really liked the story but they claim that Ning Fan is a duel cultivator but he doesn't really duel cultivate. He talks all this nonsense about capturing people to pluck but when he does capture them he never plucks anybody. On top of all of this is a serious plot hole. In the beginning of the story it was said that when he would duel cultivate both people would get benefits I believe it have something to do with the necklace then all of a sudden he needs to pluck someone to get benefits?

Don't have much issues with the writing quality. But i have plenty with they story development. I already understood from the tags and the description that the MC was evil. And from reading the first chapter I understood that the MC was likely a mental case. I'm okay with rape and incest in a story (even tho its not incest here) but the problem I have is unneeded slavery. What I mean by unneeded is this he takes his mother who is a single mother that adopted him and gave him everything he needed as a single mother. He manipulates her which is ok its apart of the story and then they have a really good relationship sex all over the place and having a good time. Then he breaks her and makes her a full time slave. Not a sex slave but a real you have to do what I want whenever type slave. huh. You could do this to strangers you can do this to gain power elsewhere but you do this to the person that treated you the best of anyone else. Not blaming the author because everything point to the MC being this way. I just didn't see it coming and when it happened it just took away from my enjoyment abit.

Thanks dodged a bullet

Thanks for the review man I dodged a bullet.