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Author's brother, is there a sequel for another novel or has it been abandoned? I am really looking forward to the next novel. Because this novel is good and I read it, but it has become a typical netori and revenge novel and it has no excitement anymore... In short, I read everything you wrote.
Problems 1-first person pov turns the story and especially the battles into an occupation, and if it wasn't there, the ranking of the novel would be several hundreds higher. 2-mc has nothing special and all his development is because he is the main character. 3- The story seems fake and it is not interesting for anyone who has read a few novels.
I hope that the child that will be born will also play a role in the novel. Of course not as a baby... a bit of time has passed... or a demon that has a high growth rate. I really like to see what happens if the baby is a boy and what happens if it is a girl. I hope the novel will not be finished before then. Thankful
Please continue it is a very good story. I am especially curious about the mother and Ariel. Take 10 minutes a day, it's good, there's no need for the chapters to be long, whatever you write is great, just please don't give up. I really like to see how a novel like this will end up.