I read the first chapter and I loved it. My favorite part was the ending quote. Although it's only the first chapter I am already in love with leon. Also your writing quality is great. I will definitely add this to my reading list.

I only read the first chapter, but I am already in love with it. Keep up the good work author. I added it to my reading list and will be sure to give you a full review when I complete it.

It was really good. I only read the prologue and the first chapter because I am at school and don't have much time, but I added it to my reading list and will continue later. I love what I am reading so far, keep up the good work author. The only thing that I find problem in is your repetition of certain words in the same sentence. My advice on that is to find a synonym to the word you want to use.

I tweaked a few things in the prologue also, and have already uploaded chapter 4

oh, right, Asuka is a guy.

thanks for the review. About being more descriptive about settings I will keep that in mind.