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TheOne_Tak3mi

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  • TheOne_Tak3mi
    TheOne_Tak3mi7mth
    Replied to InGlorious

    meh.. still feels like he went for nothing. I feel like this part would've been better in a different pov, like Dumbledores or someone.

    Ch 120 The-Champions-Chosen (II)
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    Whatever It Takes... [HP X MCU (AU) Fanfic]
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  • TheOne_Tak3mi
    TheOne_Tak3mi7mth
    Commented

    huh, you know I'd forgotten that this was even a crossoveršŸ¤£. I thought the author was smoking something by suddenly introducing marvel.

    /They called themselves Hydra and I don't want to talk about them/ Himera gestured furiously. She didn't want to talk about those monsters.
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    Whatever It Takes... [HP X MCU (AU) Fanfic]
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  • TheOne_Tak3mi
    TheOne_Tak3mi7mth
    Commented

    gotta be honest, I have no idea where you want to take this fic with this time travel bulls**t. but I'm wary because time travel has ruined a lot of fanfics.

    Ch 111 A-Wrong-Turn (II)
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    Whatever It Takes... [HP X MCU (AU) Fanfic]
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  • TheOne_Tak3mi
    TheOne_Tak3mi7mth
    Commented
    [Since it's a young multiverse an your goals are inevitably going to guide you to pursuing immortality and dimensional travel, yes I can discern that without you telling me. I am willing to offer what you know as a system]
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    Skyrim: A Sorcerer's Tale
    Video Games Ā· Rastislav
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  • TheOne_Tak3mi
    TheOne_Tak3mi7mth
    Replied to GardenDevil
    "I am glad I get to die as any man should, old and surrounded by his kids. Remember to always look after each other and never truly fight amongst yourselves"
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    Skyrim: A Sorcerer's Tale
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  • TheOne_Tak3mi
    TheOne_Tak3mi7mth
    Replied to Ilovenovel

    he's probably gonna win like that isn't he...

    It doesn't take me long to make it there, and I stop just before a complicated circle of ash and chalk, drawn across the grass just on the outskirts of the town. I wait patiently, my eyes wide open for the exact moment the array activates.
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    In DxD with the Eyes of God
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  • TheOne_Tak3mi
    TheOne_Tak3mi7mth
    Replied to Taro

    yeah, I agree. Pretty soon, he'll be acting like those dense anime protagonists and the excuse will be "hE wAs aN oRpHan" he isn't experienced with love...it's just dumb manšŸ™„

    In my confusion, I completely forget to use my eyes to find out what's going on.)
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    In DxD with the Eyes of God
    Anime & Comics Ā· Ventus889
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  • TheOne_Tak3mi
    TheOne_Tak3mi7mth
    Commented
    Loki's eyes widened in recognition. "Demeter Familia? You're with her? That would explain why I'm here."
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    Is it wrong to live steadily!
    Anime & Comics Ā· Iseeyou6969
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  • TheOne_Tak3mi
    TheOne_Tak3mi8mth
    Commented

    hmm, author forgot that he said this guy watched the movie I seešŸ˜‘

    "Ah shit. What the hell is going on in this universe, how did so many Spider-Men appear?" Mark sat slumped on the couch with a lifeless look on his face.
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    Spider-Verse: Another Spider-Man
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  • TheOne_Tak3mi
    TheOne_Tak3mi8mth
    Replied to TheOne_Tak3mi

    I'm still at the beginning chapters.it's well written, but I did notice one crucial thing that's missing at the beginning. and that's emotion, we really don't see much of what Percy is feeling. for example, being scared when he wakes up alone in a cell, his first kill, etc. I know it's mentioned that he's being strong so that he can meet his mother again, but at least show something.it does get better as the chapters go by, so it's not gonna be an issue for long if the improvement continues.

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    Percy Jackson: the dark souls survivor
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  • TheOne_Tak3mi
    TheOne_Tak3mi8mth
    Commented

    just say eyes manšŸ˜‘, hues even though it might sound "cool" to you. Is wrong in this context.

    He didn't even have the time to look around, the only thing his hues could take in was a large sign that said "C.C's Spa and Resort. Then the scene shifted.
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    FrostBitten (Percy Jackson Fanfic)
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  • TheOne_Tak3mi
    TheOne_Tak3mi8mth
    Posted

    40 chapters but only 5 reviews... I'll read it, but you gotta admit that's pretty sus...

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    Percy Jackson: the dark souls survivor
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  • TheOne_Tak3mi
    TheOne_Tak3mi8mth
    Commented
    According to the Prophet, the story went something like thisā€¦ A young man, not even out of Hogwarts' age range yet, with seemingly no background stormed into Gringotts. To a crowd of witnesses, Wizard and Goblin alike, he declared himself heir to Merlin and the Founders.
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    The Grind (And Helping Heather Potter) [Complete]
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  • TheOne_Tak3mi
    TheOne_Tak3mi9mth
    Commented

    and to think he could've used this "suggestion" to convince his parents to movešŸ˜‘šŸ˜‘. welp that's plot I guess, we wouldn't be reading this if he just movedšŸ˜‚.

    After using "Suggestion" to locate the hotel where Matou Kariya was staying under police surveillance, he also obtained the internal structure of the Matou family by using the Demi-Servant's Caster class "Suggestion" on them before they left, creating a map of the family's structure.
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    Fate: I Will Eventually Become the Hero of Justice
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  • TheOne_Tak3mi
    TheOne_Tak3mi9mth
    Replied to Pushkar_Malik

    it's a Chinese translation, I wouldn't be surprised if he's face slapping and coughing blood in future chapters tbhšŸ˜‘šŸ˜‘

    Surprise, shock, puzzlement, confusion... in an instant, many complex expressions passed through Gilgamesh's blood-red eyes, and finally, a very interested smile appeared on his face.
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    Fate: I Will Eventually Become the Hero of Justice
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  • TheOne_Tak3mi
    TheOne_Tak3mi9mth
    Posted

    ah, I was wondering why everything was so over the top and exaggerated, It turns out it's a Chinese translation. Now, it makes sense why the conversations are so terrible and the flow even worse than ai written novels.but I've got to admit that besides me cringing every time the characters open their mouths, everything else has been pretty decent.

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    Fate: I Will Eventually Become the Hero of Justice
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  • TheOne_Tak3mi
    TheOne_Tak3mi10mth
    Replied to Celestialicz

    šŸ¤£šŸ¤£

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    The barber:Dc
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  • TheOne_Tak3mi
    TheOne_Tak3mi10mth
    Replied to Avengtank

    couldn't have said it better myself.

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    Why A Dimensional Chat Group?
    Anime & Comics Ā· OVERLOAD69
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  • TheOne_Tak3mi
    TheOne_Tak3mi11mth
    Commented

    sure, mumble sensitive info. it's not like you're in a world with ninjas or somethingšŸ˜‘

    "So I've reincarnated into the body of Sasuke Uchiha?" Yasuiā€“no, Sasuke mumbled in the room.
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    Naruto: Skill Copying System
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  • TheOne_Tak3mi
    TheOne_Tak3mi11mth
    Commented

    this loki thing is hella confusing man. didn't he watch till season 2? if so then he shouldn't be acting this weird about meeting loki

    "I said, when can I meet him anyway?"
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    Dungeon Delving is damn HARD! (Danmachi/Naruto)
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