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huh, you know I'd forgotten that this was even a crossoverš¤£. I thought the author was smoking something by suddenly introducing marvel.
he's probably gonna win like that isn't he...
yeah, I agree. Pretty soon, he'll be acting like those dense anime protagonists and the excuse will be "hE wAs aN oRpHan" he isn't experienced with love...it's just dumb manš
hmm, author forgot that he said this guy watched the movie I seeš
I'm still at the beginning chapters.it's well written, but I did notice one crucial thing that's missing at the beginning. and that's emotion, we really don't see much of what Percy is feeling. for example, being scared when he wakes up alone in a cell, his first kill, etc. I know it's mentioned that he's being strong so that he can meet his mother again, but at least show something.it does get better as the chapters go by, so it's not gonna be an issue for long if the improvement continues.
just say eyes manš, hues even though it might sound "cool" to you. Is wrong in this context.
and to think he could've used this "suggestion" to convince his parents to movešš. welp that's plot I guess, we wouldn't be reading this if he just movedš.
it's a Chinese translation, I wouldn't be surprised if he's face slapping and coughing blood in future chapters tbhšš
ah, I was wondering why everything was so over the top and exaggerated, It turns out it's a Chinese translation. Now, it makes sense why the conversations are so terrible and the flow even worse than ai written novels.but I've got to admit that besides me cringing every time the characters open their mouths, everything else has been pretty decent.
sure, mumble sensitive info. it's not like you're in a world with ninjas or somethingš
this loki thing is hella confusing man. didn't he watch till season 2? if so then he shouldn't be acting this weird about meeting loki