NixOrtikal
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NixOrtikal1mthReplied to Blue_Phoenix_2413Hi👋 Just seeing your msg. Thanks for pointing out the errors 😊 I'm not sure if I can make corrections once a book is tagged as completed but will try 🤔 I really hope you'll stick it out to the end since iys filled with a lot of shocking twists & turns, thanks for choosing it & happy reading 📚
Ch 24 Formidable- NixOrtikal1mthCommentedCh 8 CHAPTER EIGHT
- NixOrtikal2mthReplied to Jumpin_JehozaphatCh 114 A look of disappointment
- NixOrtikal2mthReplied to JiggyGizzyCh 114 A look of disappointment
- NixOrtikal3mthReplied to CYNTHIA_MARCOTTE
Somebody gets it, perhaps those two guardians knew more than what they told Kaoma 🤔
Not that she was justifying his actions but it wasn't any worse than what she and her guardians did to him using iron to chain him down a metal he was deadly allergic to. - NixOrtikal3mthReplied to Mama_Jen_6020
Greetings Mama Jen, in this chapter I mentioned that Kaoma was 9yrs old when she came to Castle Hellshire. So Kaoma would have been older, closer to 11yrs when her mom got pregnant with her second child. Since her parents died a year after Sarika was born. Kaoma would been closer to 12 yrs old. I can understand the confusion, so I will edit the chapter shortly to make it clearer. Thanks for bringing it to my attention🤔
Ch 1 The Wild Hunt - NixOrtikal3mthReplied to Crimson78
hi👋 thanks for pointing this out, I did think about hiking up her age but I felt it better for her to remain at 7😊 So, I'll make the corrections to chapters now. So going forward Sarika will be 7 at the time she enters the convent.
This paragraph has been deleted. - NixOrtikal3mthReplied to Infinitum_Kairos
Thank you, will edit later.
This paragraph has been deleted. - NixOrtikal3mthReplied to Infinitum_Kairos
Thank you, will edit later.
This paragraph has been deleted. - NixOrtikal6mthCommentedCh 172 Confirmation
- NixOrtikal7mthCommentedCh 102 Target For An Energy Source
- NixOrtikal8mthCommentedCh 58 I Refuse to Wallow Part 2
- NixOrtikal8mthCommentedCh 35 Steadfast
- NixOrtikal8mthCommentedCh 1 Prologue - Waking
- NixOrtikal9mthCommentedCh 32 Do you Want to Die?
- NixOrtikal10mthReplied to m_small
I guess we have to assume she ditched the armor at some point to keep up with the others while 🏃♀️ running. Remember those Zanbar guys that tried to kidnap her. They are connected to her family and the ring. She is the keeper of the chaos orb, just a small shard gives a lot of power, so if someone evil controls all the pieces of the chaos orb its doomday for mankind[img=strong]
Ch 126 On another level - NixOrtikal10mthReplied to m_smallCh 125 Get a clue
- NixOrtikal10mthReplied to SeraphWeddCh 1 For the right price
- NixOrtikal10mthReplied to m_smallCh 117 Calm before the storm