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Yuu_Fall

Yuu_Fall

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Loves to Read Romance...

2022-05-25 JoinedGlobal
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  • Yuu_Fall
    Yuu_Fall4mth
    Posted

    It's good. Even though i've read the same plot as the other Chinese novel out there, it's good. Kudos for you

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    Yuu_Fall4mth
    Posted

    That was good. I didn't understand the first sentence of the synopsis, but after i read the story, damn. I'm flabbergasted. I usually don't read this kind of story but the way Author-san tell her/his story is amazing like you can see the characters and the background in an ultra HD TV. I skipped some of it due to how detailed Author-san tell on the characters suit, dress, accessories, their expression. This is clearly not a amateur writing. This is top notch for people with etiquette.

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    Hello Again, My Beloved
    Teen · Fiorerai
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  • Yuu_Fall
    Yuu_Fall9mth
    Posted

    it's good overall but can you please give us(The Readers) a sign on where is the plot coming. It was perfect at the first chapter but after I read the next chapter my reaction was kinda "huh?" moments cause I was lost and after reading a few paragraphs I understand that the chapter 2 is still part of the wedding scene, while the chapter 1 was a quick summary of the story.It's good.I'm just showing a honest review, nothing else.

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  • Yuu_Fall
    Yuu_Fall10mth
    Replied to IndominsRexx

    Let's just wait for later updates... don't want to spoil anything from this point on

    Ch 11 Chapter 11: Annoying
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    Your Ending And My Beginning
    Realistic · Yuu_Fall
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  • Yuu_Fall
    Yuu_Fall1yr
    Commented

    This is Nice mate!

    Ch 1 Taking the first higher quest
    altalt
    The Origin of Spirits from Within
    Fantasy · KzyRefaDe
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