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DaoistQ6iVlt10mthReplied to Ketvertas4Hello, author here. Very much appreciated for liking my story. It motivated me to keep up the work :). ❤️ ❤️ ❤️
Name - Den(Earthling)/ Age - 28/ Gender - Male- DaoistQ6iVlt1yrReplied to devil0_dem0n
You can read about the skills and characters in Chap 5 and 6
Skill(active) - domain authority(Level 0), fear(Level 0), (locked), (locked), (locked), (locked), (locked), (locked). - DaoistQ6iVlt1yrReplied to devil0_dem0n
It was the status of individual that god race created to hold a competition on earth, You can say it like Beta System but yea MC got it as the first player while he was transferred to EXANIMIS, the domain of the EX QUEEN of XENO.
System activated, (Player Name - Morph(X), species - parasite(XENO), location - unknown, current survivor - one) ATTENTION - This player account had been banned from entering main server. Can't use current ranking features. Initiating secondary system (Player Name - Den(Earthling), location - unknown, current survivor - one, current state - calm, ranking point - 0, shop system - not available, supplying basic info statuses - available). - DaoistQ6iVlt1yrReplied to devil0_dem0n
I will change it into the other name, if god name does make you uncomfortable
THEN LET'S START THE GAME, SHALL WE? - DaoistQ6iVlt1yrReplied to devil0_dem0nCh 2 The Loner - The cursed fate
- DaoistQ6iVlt1yrReplied to devil0_dem0n
Thank you fornliking my story
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Thank you for reading my story
Now, my chosen one, i will give you my strength and power but can you afford the cost of it? - DaoistQ6iVlt1yrReplied to shakkar_kane
I am quite confused, my story?
But unlike his expectation, Sam and Jenny were making love as if they knew each other as a couple. He was clueless and his mind went blank as soon as he saw them. - DaoistQ6iVlt1yrReplied to devil0_dem0n
What is it?
His best friend and girlfriend hug him in the back and ask him. He never feel uncomfortable being around them as those two had been childhood friends of him. In the back, Sam is slowly getting closer to Jenny, Jenny has a weird look in her eye but he doesn't know about this. - DaoistQ6iVlt1yrPosted
First of all, i like how the author writes about his stories, there are a lot of things and new vocab for me to learn here. Anyway, the story-line is solid and you will see eastern culture here, in the different version unlike today, if you are a fan of reading manhua and cultivation and stuffs, the writing skill of the author is top-notched and the martial arts included in this novel is really interesting. My message to author - It would be better if you added something more detail, not writing in general but more specific, like martial techniques, what kind of, how to practice, if there are like blood stone or stuffs, what they are for, where can you find them, what is their origins, myths. I think it would be more interesting that way. But i like this book and to read very much.
- DaoistQ6iVlt1yrPosted
I don't want to be a spoiler, overall, it is a good book, for people like me, who like to read, survival and building kingdom like genre, this book is a fit to read, also author writes story in details but when it reaches to climax, you will get really hype. You have to be patient to read, if you are then, you will like this book. The story line is amazing and author want to take reader to his world slowly so he writes his earlier chapters to support the story line. I really like to read it. If you like added this to library.
- DaoistQ6iVlt1yrCommentedCh 5 The Loner - Characters explain.
- DaoistQ6iVlt1yrReplied to shakkar_kaneCh 2 The Loner - The cursed fate