I swear his reaction are so irritating and exagerated. Like bro should have see much more already.

This guy's "experience" fluctuates too much.

nepo

you underestimate poverty

it is. it also translates to many other things concerning you as an individual. You are more susceptible to mass manipulation.

How can you be 20 and not know your parents' names? That is a 10-12-year-old moment of realisation.

This was a perfect joke. NGL

This is quite alot for a boost. If you're doing this much, I hope it would be consistent. He can't get all the power up available and be on the same level as the "top" players.

Gas in the future? haha. I'm just nitpicking. No hate involved

I read number one and said, "Yes". read no. 2 and said, "oh".

I didn’t know you were Nigerian or maybe Nigerien🤔

Is this tuwo by chance molded rice?

Haha. I have been a reader and now I am the author. I speak and write fluent English so I believe my writing quality should be acceptable. I made this novel because it would seem fun. It is basically completely my idea, even the cover picture was creatively "gotten". At least, I have never read a book like it. I tried to make the main character real. Not too perfect, nor are his supposed flaws soo obvious. I think the beginning might seem a bit slow, but as someone who likes some context about the world, I ensured to think it through and shove that in there. There would be no harem, for the mc at least. He would have a love life though like a normal person. He would be strong. Not the strongest but really strong. I would not diversify his powers excessively. I have always hated that thing. I am a university student, so I don't have all the time in the world, so I would try my best to post at least once every 2 weeks after ch 20.

I’d give an honest review. I really enjoy this book. It has a nice concept, good world building and the main character is well thought out. Most other characters don’t have much depth to them but it’s understandable, it’s a game with many players. I would say that I didn’t like the story development that much. It’s the classic “new power up, stronger adversaries”. How can he clash with an ancient dragon here but is scared of a baby one there. He would fight toe to toe with the strongest people in one place but go somewhere else that should on the same level but meet much stronger opponents. I know it’s for the story but I don’t like it. He can’t be losing every other mental battle, how would any other person survive on the continent if that was the case. I am also frustrated by the horrible editing further into the book, especially in the privileged chapters. These things make or break your book. Do better. I would writing a book soon and I know my review may seem harsh, but take it as constructive criticism. I do like your book hence my incessant support.

It’s literal impossible to read at this point. Run your stuff throu grammarly or chatgpt before posting. It wou make a huge difference. This seems rushed to the poi that you didn’t even take your word processor’s corrections

Typo

This makes like the 5th repeated chapter. Come on, do better.

Bro, there been way too many errors in the last 50 or so chapters. I feel that i am not getting my money’s worth

he should be reasonably overpowered. Not that he just happens upon infinite power.