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Hey guys, author here. I thought since my book doesn't have even one review yet (4 chapters atm, my first book), I will just start the review train lol. Just wanted to briefly talk about the direction *I want* to take (want, because it can change). I feel like first chapters have a lot of text/descriptions and not much action, but I want to write everything, let's call it "setting up the stage", so later it's easier to add-on, build action etc. Anyway, the MC won't be overpowered unless he achieves it on his own by working hard. No system, harem is not planned (harem might appear, I don't know the future of this book, but even if it does, it wouldn't be some side-chicks that take away the MC's attention - I'm not into stuff like that lol, they would need to contribute, be useful). Anyway, I'm encouraging you guys to write any good things that you spot in my book, actually the bad ones also, so I can improve.
Dude, it was a promise. fulfilling such a promise that gave you a chance to live should be a goal for him.
thanks for the chapter. πͺπΌ
Lmao, thanks for the chapter.
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this time it has sense, actually it would be smarter to use some points and its stupid to keep them. with more power, he could level up more easily. but being an idiot he is, he is keeping points. (0 int)
Ive seen it advertised on webnovel's discord server and decided to give it a try. And now, after reading all the available chapters atm I'm not dissapointed. The novel turned out to be very well thought-out, the MC knows what he is doing :). I cant wait to read more, keep up the good work πͺπΌπ
he just tried to commit suicide and they let him go to the bathroom alone ? lol
will they accept protection fee though? looks like Xavier wont be able to open his own stall :(( (xD)