Seraloves

That's great, it was the only thing that made me struggle a littlr when reading the affected parts.

It's good, I have only 1 thing to say that would improve the story by a lot. Please never use first person (mc) when he isn't there and when the scene changes from where mc is. Using "I" or "me" instead of "Cael" or "he" really destorys the reading experience for those scenes. So fixing that would make the reading experience a lot better. For example when 2 people talking about Cael in another location than where Cael is, the story teller will say something like this: "They didn't think I was that powerful." instead of : "They didn't think Cael was that powerful." I don't know if you have fixed it in the newer chapters or so, but just wanted to let you know so further chapters will have better reading experience.

So no discord server?

I read this many months ago, and quite enjoyed it. I was wondering if you have a discord server where you post illustrations of the characters. If not, I would really recommend it, makes it much easier for readers to look up characters.

I have already read 22 chapters, and I noticed how well you write conversations and interactions. I also love how you use paragraphs and in general making it easy to read. Another thing I love it the personality of the mc and his way of talking. Great work, will continue reading this one and later more of your work. I can say for an fact it was worth coming back to reading. [img=recommend]❤

Finally back to reading after a long time, this will be my first read after a long while [img=recommend]

Nvm it's the exact same start

No wonder I felt deja vu, it's similar to, leave me alone heroines. I was so confused 🤣

Nooo censor it!

But yea if it's other stuff than her then I guess he could make it?