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DaoistjID7yj2mthCommentedcontinue please
1. Continue the story as is.- DaoistjID7yj6mthCommented
Yes this one is better than previous one
(A/N: Should i use this format? Effects: Str = How much he can lift, Dex= Reaction time, Agi = Movement Speed, Per= how far he can normally perceive the world. BTW, SW = Soul Weight > Its displaying the remaining "Space in his soul", instead of total. Total is currently sitting at 29,362, and its influenced by global level .) - DaoistjID7yj7mthPosted
Hello Author, The grammar quality is good enough to read without issue but the problem is when people are in conversation no emotions conveyed at many or almost all chapters like for example if Eric speaks or his friends speaks they just say like amber said-----eric said------bro please write the emotion by which they are speaking like if they smiling while speaking or indifferently or coldly oe sadly like anything bro please just add the emotion just because of this i had to drop this 3 times then again continue after sometimes of there are any improvements.please author do improve it.Yours loyal reader.
- DaoistjID7yj1yrReplied to Daoist3666663Ch 149 TERRIBLE NEWS
- DaoistjID7yj1yrCommented
In my opinion if mrs rajput dies then it will be better for Rudra as he will get strong and will get the determination to get stronger plus she was also kind of baggage to him as only 1.5 years left till the main event so only few things are there that he can do by all himself. well it may be my biased POV but no offense 🙅🏻♂️. Peace ☮️✌🏻
Ch 700 A tragedy