Lothaire_Genesys

I am already a goodnovel author with a non exclusive contract for this book.

i like where this is going.

lol, teenagers ruling the world, this is a recipe for apocalypse

i think some ppl would have liked to see some of these hardships occur but either way would be fine if it was more descriptive

The story is nice but it is progressing too fast and the grammar also needs some work, the character design.....has to be a bit more elaborate. Aside from that, the plot is very interesting, it really draws the reader in. Keep going, your doing great.

i like the plot, the setting and the general characters but I think the pace is rushed in a way but great job.

You gave a 4 star review. Please tell e what it was lucking so I can improve.

i forgot how to give energy stones, please remind me.

thank you so much, I appreciate your support.

Wow, you're story is great. It got me hooked even though I'm not a fan of spooky stuff. It's definitely one of a kind. Although the grammar is a bit off. You kind of mix up tenses but that's something you learn the more you read and write. Good job.