As the time for Harry's semifinal match approached, he was set to face a 16-year-old competitor from Koldovstoretz, the Russian wizarding school known for its unique take on Quidditch, where players fly on entire, uprooted trees instead of broomsticks.
The history Is pretty good, but its geting a little boring with the excess of introspección, It would be preferable, at less to me, If you include more about his acctions insted of his thougts.
Por como lo hás redactado, supongo que este mundo no es tan común como aparenta o de alguna forma interactuará con otro, si no es el caso, disculpame pero no le vería el caso a entregar tales recompensas.
Ch 2 The legendary marrow cleansing
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un inicio humilde y bien redactando, aunque es un poco acelerado en cuanto a los acontecimientos, en general, es un inicio decente, seguiré tu historia para ver por dónde puedes llevarlo. ☺️
Ch 1 System?
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