Stud222

Exactly my thoughts.

Where is the next chap author it's been 15 fu****ing day

At first it was good.then after chap 30 it becomes very bad when author use some guy who uses forest type of fruit in canon I forget his name.THan they survive by luck.After that author decided to give Liam a devil fruit which I can't understand properly it becomes very boring for me.either you give him a god df or don't give him any what's up with that df.And author don't describe Liam strength that much.just saying he is weaker than Zoro and Luffy but how much far behind is he? We have no idea.I am honestly surprised this fic has such high rating lol.

Lossing interest because of devil fruit

I think mokuton should be 10/10

Not gonna toxic but it is the worst Naruto fic I ever read in this site।I get it you was inspire from hokage master।But the way you execution this in your novel it the worst I can say।At latest chap Naruto rape ino was my bottom line.you make Naruto rapist.And all of over that you rape ino.

So he will only learn earth bending not other nature ?

Ok no need to so rude.He is new author.You don't have to give two star and break his confidence.

Nope don't add romance.And for lemons you can do it for attract readers.See you novel is only 250k views where others with 30 chap cross 1m views. You can do it .one night stand will be good choice.

Read gojo in a soul society, Madara in a avatar world. Naruto aokji yuji.