Good_Person_3883

is this an original if not could you give me the raws for this novel and if it is original could you make a self review. the rest of these words are just to fill the word count

what is the raw for theirs novel

I hope you do multiverse xianxia apocalypse starting from earth next after you finish this book. something like defiance of the fall i really like this idea but it’s never been done how i like and i think with your writing style you will do it very good

I hope you do a multiverse litrpg xianxia apocalypse next after this novel something like defiance of the fall i like the concept and all but i feel like it’s never been done well

or you could use chatgpt to help you and edit to fix the final result if you don’t mind this is what the first half of your first chapter came out after i told chatgpt to improve the syntax and wording but to keep the content the same Certainly! Here's a revised version of the chapter with improved syntax and wording: --- Noah and his beloved family. "Thief! Thief ahead, don't let him escape!" In the chaotic marketplace, a middle-aged man brandished a knife, relentlessly chasing a teenage boy through the crowd. The teenager, Noah, barely eighteen, had a nondescript figure that blended into the bustling throng. Yet, his eyes betrayed a gravity and urgency that belied his youthful appearance. He had often daydreamed about being pursued—by admiring girls, not an irate middle-aged man. But now, there was no room for fantasies. Noah darted through alleys of varying shapes and sizes, trying to shake off his relentless pursuer. Yet, no matter how he hid or maneuvered, the man seemed to possess an uncanny ability to track him down. Cornering into a dim alley, Noah turned sharply, only to find the man blocking his path. "Nowhere left to run, boy. Hand over the meat you stole," the man demanded, glaring at Noah. Noah faced him with a wry smile, "Could you enlighten me on how you manage to find me every time?" The man's eyes blazed with fury. "My psychic skill is a Grade C full-tracking ability. Once I mark something or someone, they're as good as caught. Now, return the meat. It was hard-earned, taken back from a troop nearby." Noah sighed in resignation, finally understanding why he kept getting caught. He returned the meat with an apology and slipped away. The man, too, returned to his stall with his retrieved goods. Once Noah had evaded his pursuer, the man pocketed a small portion of the recovered meat, his stern expression softening. He hurried towards a small forest on the outskirts, where Noah's family resided. Upon returning home and opening his door, he was greeted by a younger teenager guarding the entrance with a machete—Noah's brother, John. Thirteen years old and eager to prove himself, John looked at Noah and said earnestly, "Next time, take me with you. We wouldn't have to rely on luck then." Noah regarded his brother seriously, "No, your duty is to protect our younger siblings at home. I'll handle finding food." Indeed, Noah and John had younger siblings. As Noah finished speaking, the curtains of their modest home parted, revealing three small figures. Leading the charge was the youngest, Ying, a spirited five-year-old clutching a wooden sword. "Brother John, are you planning to leave us behind again? If anyone goes with Big Brother, it should be me first!" John glanced at her tenderly, "Have you finished reading the book Big Bro brought you? Finish it before you think about anything else." Ying's eyes brimmed with tears, seeking solace from her brother, determined not to read another page. --- I hope this revision captures the essence of your original chapter while enhancing the flow and clarity of the narrative! Let me know if there's anything else you'd like to adjust.

i like everything about he story except for the fact that the writing is a little bad but i can see visible improvement over the chapters. I think you should rewrite from the beginning after you think your imporvememt plateaus