Ian_White

The writer can do better with writing quality, the character designs can also be better, and I already said that it was understandable that there wasn’t much world building. Everything wrong or bad about the writing is because the writer is either not skilled/educated or they didn’t bother to put in enough effort when writing. Why does it seem like you are pushing the blame for the crappy writing away from the writer and onto the readers? There isn’t anything we can do about the sub-par writing aside from letting the writer know by giving an honest review. That means highlighting the flaws and commending the positive aspects. It is a shame that any good aspects of the content was hidden away by the mediocre grammar, atrocious sentence structure, and the barely noticeable pacing.

Its honestly a bit sad how the writer seems to think that insulting someone is a decent way of making the work harder.

Is this a translation?

Writer, not author. If you aren’t creating your own story, or are using another work as a basis, then you aren’t authoring anything and can be considered a writer at best.

Yeah, I was a bit disappointed that it stopped being updated. The novel was pretty good as far as I remember. Do you still post on scribblehub? Webnovel’s U.I. is a bit bad compared to scribblehub.

Was this on scribblehub then it went on hiatus for a few months/ was deleted? I’m 90% sure I have read this before

Did I miss a chapter or was this out of nowhere.

Not bad, let’s just hope it doesn’t turn into the 1,000,000,000,e7245925 year old chinese MC that every women from age 15+ will bend over for “because he is so strong and it is the duty of women to serve”. Seriously though, here’s to the MC stopping at like 3-5 women (more if they die off) at most.

100% mediocre. The title is not fitting, the entire interactions between the MC and the “female knight” is idiotic, and it likely won’t get any better.

I read one like that but the lover raised the dying person from the dead and basically treated him as a plushie/doll.