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Deleted8571yrCommented*pick up on their conversation
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forced *him
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Imagine how bad his blood and genes must be. Poor avell[img=faceslap]
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The whole Code is often referred as program but that is if you want to. Of course is also right
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Naruto: You mean me? Luffy: Me? Goku: Of course me every mc in vicinity: H€ll yea, it's me
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Uchiha! !! 😎
"How did it go?" The agile voice of his best friend Damian was what he heard from the other end of the line, the bloody red eyes of his had dissipated, turning back to the crystal black eyes that made him look normal. - Deleted8571yrCommented
Chop chop and then burn would've been better option
Sixteen years ago, he and a group of men were sent to destroy the Zephyr family on a certain night and he was 100% sure they accomplished their mission because after killing everyone, they immediately burnt down the house along with the dead bodies. - Deleted8571yrPosted
Let's see... The plot is great. Characters seem nice too tho it gets a bit confusing when so many names are used at once and repeated constantly. There are many grammatical errors but they can be fixed with slight editing. There are more than many punctual mistakes which make it a bit difficult to read. Like the double quotes are misplaced a lot. The world background could be explained more. And not to mention the characters. It can give a wide view of the story to readers. The story is going with a good pace and seems interesting. Keep up
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Yes, because they both look different since they inherited different features, each from their mom or dad.
"H.. Hyung!!" She sat up straight and flinched due to the pain. - Deleted8571yrReplied to Risks
No, there is no revenge or bad father. And no, their mom is not dead and marel is harry's full brother.
That day was a complete life turning for every prof in the school except a few ones. The ones who had been excluded out of THAT. - Deleted8571yrReplied to Risks
Yes, as said in the last parts of chapter 23 and start of chapter 24, he has told her who he is. And she already knows what is happening because of marel.
That day was a complete life turning for every prof in the school except a few ones. The ones who had been excluded out of THAT. - Deleted8571yrReplied to Tuupkagtroth
- Deleted8571yrCommented"Leader, after this job are we going to the pub again?" A young woman with huge tits and shapely bum asked. She was holding Leonard's arm as she rubbed her tits on his arm. The men at the back were enjoying the sight of her shapely bum swaying. That was the main reason they chose to stay at the back.