RedCollosus

well it woudnt be telekinesis then. it would be psychokinesis. honestly its still doable. and atoms are solid objects. telekinesis can effect anything with energy and mass. unless its a ghost particle. as they have no mass. but can also destroy the universe if she goes south so..yea im rambling XD

could have written that one better

nigga what

will is just a dick for no reason. christ man he's 10

quite frankly i love the way you wrote the story. its pacing is kinda weird at times but it still flows well. and honestly that helped this story alot. and illyana as the main love interest im guess(hoping) is a nice touch. never see a pairing with her at all( at least not a weird one) although i wonder why your going the anime route with the armor. as the manga route goes more in line with the story is progressing. but i see some of the manga elements as well. such as the eyes and horns although im curious about the implications of incursio finding him and not the other way around. keep up the good work my man. we eating good.

yea night city is easy to navigate if your smart about it

once incursio is bound to a user the sword can only be passed on if the previous user is dead or dying with no signs of recovery. but if the bonding goes as far as it did in the manga. then removing the user from the weapon will be impossible. much like the suit from crysis 2 and 3. the suit is now permanantly bound and a part of you and is necessary for survival at that point. much like a vital organ like the heart. and removal will kill the host(if thats even possible after complete symbiosis as tatsumi turns into a fucking dragon in the manga and starts a family with mine) also alot of stuff in the manga is inaccurrate as the anime ended 3 years before the manga even concluded

you know what you must do