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Like I said, the plot is promising, with all the mistakes rectified, it will be a good novel. ^^

I hate giving bad reviews and normally I'm a "if you can't say anything nice, stay silent" kinda girl but this is... hmmm, the only thing promising is the plot. Think you used to wrong year, it's not set in 1991 or 1980. Too many spelling mistakes, wrong words being used (taught instead of thought), using abbreviations i.e. thou, not capitalising the start of sentences or the start of speech, in fact hardly using any capital letters at all, not for names or anything. Sorry love, I appreciate the effort you made writing this but it's not easy to read and I would not pay for this, let alone use free fps I spent time to get, the 20 minutes from reading it for the fp reward was enough for me as I don't think it would improve the more chapters I read. Sorry. 😞

I think he should be called Alexander, as Alexandria is a girl's name. few spelling mistakes and using wrong words like freight instead of fright but it's a good start, you have my interest. ^^

Me again, sorry, I'm tired and chatty! King Desmond... there is an oldish British sitcom called The Desmonds which has a character called Pork Pie... yes, it's also a food, pork pies are so nice!! Mira reminds me of my friend Krasimira, not a food, just a really lovely friend with a pretty name and nickname! *munches on Ferrero Rocher* ^^

I like this novel, it's a good plot and I like the characters, although the ML makes me think of devilled eggs (sorry 😞). Well, seeing the name Benedict makes me think of eggs benedict, I think a lot about food obviously! Just waiting to find a ML called Caesar, Ferrero, Rocher or ermmm, kitkat. ^^

I love this novel, its so good. Well written, fantastic characters and plot, easy to immerse yourself, 5/5 from me! ^^

*mourns poor kitty cat*

Thanks for the reminder, I still have 'Bride of the Water God' to read! ^^

Wait, what? Garlic? Hmmm... going to see if Maltesers have the safe effect!!!

Hmmm, I needed a fantasy novel to push my fantasy genre FPs at, this is not bad at all! Carry on! ^^