Childhood_Memories

Tbh story is all good but .... He seems weak willed. Like how easily he starts liking other , trusting other, his actions and words are completely different or to say contradictory. If possible fix that... He's making friends everywhere , he might just die trying to save those if not for plot armour.

What about MC holding his family whole time as his responsibility?or will he move forward alone?

Bruhhhhhhh.... It's more like another clinche where guy comes and become another protagonist....💀💀....like it was raven duty according to norm but he's doing it instead ...like for real ...Why make character so illogical 💀......

Everything good, but he seems too caring of other.... Will there be character development to colder side where he is indifferent to other misery.... If you can't make him a villain atleast don't make him a hero... He's being hypocrite... Says he won't help other and always helping peps.... kind of too selfless that feels stupid now...

He seems to generous, kind of like being too good without asking anything in return

Actually I loved this novel at start but now... It's degrading, he's caring about random mobs and all, putting his life in danger for theirs and getting saved by plot armour.. Its frustrating that it's not even relatable just pure fantasy without any metaphor . Really don't like that he don't care to improve his strength instead go around just to help some people and wasting time when he is giver a timer

Even if you make it romance.. Pls make her useful else it makes it more like he's dckhead

Thank yaa and I really feel grateful for your work!

My question is Outta context but...as a person who got taste of RI ik we can't read another one with same feel...but still anything for timepass can you recommend? except those famous work like warlock and all

Just one answer...why tfff he favour a good for nothing bitch olivia?????????????..... Really reallly soo frustrating