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DaoisthjLX4f4mthPostedAt the beginning the plot was fine, especially because I like the idea that the protagonist has Superman's powers, but when I discovered that all the chapters of the entire novel were focused only between World War II and the beginning of What it happens then I realized it wasn't for me anymore. I thought he was going to write a story about fighting Tano and the usual stuff, not this one.
- DaoisthjLX4f4mthCommentedCh 42 Chapter 41: Eris pads her chest
- DaoisthjLX4f4mthCommentedCh 42 Chapter 41: Eris pads her chest
- DaoisthjLX4f4mthCommentedCh 41 Chapter 40: Training with Erza
- DaoisthjLX4f4mthCommentedCh 24 Chapter 23: Alcanretia 3
- DaoisthjLX4f4mthCommentedCh 23 Chapter 22: Alcanretia 2
- DaoisthjLX4f4mthCommentedCh 20 Chapter 19: Truth
- DaoisthjLX4f5mthReplied to KuroG4n3
he was on a call, so he heard almost nothing.
Ran who heard his words, immediately blushed, because she knew that only she had imagined all sorts of scenes between Shikami and the girl named Everclear, which was also a name of alcoholic. - DaoisthjLX4f5mthReplied to javi299
The plot length of Detective Conan does not follow the plot of the anime, which is why I set the ages of the characters according to my preferences.
Going back to a few years ago. Shinichi Kudo had gone out on a date with Ran at an amusement park, but then immediately found himself entangled in a case which he managed to solve, but while he noticed two men in black, he chased them and discovered a plot, but just when he was about to intervene, was almost knocked out of the game, while onesome men in black named 'Gin' gave him a drug that was supposed to be a poison. - DaoisthjLX4f6mthReplied to neis_markoCh 11 Successful Plan
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This novel is very, very slow in love relationships, and until chapter 40, there isn't much difference or obvious love entanglements, so for now there isn't. I originally wrote this novel because I really liked Detective Conan, but it still hadn't occurred to me to write too much about love, even if the protagonist is actually in love with a girl in the story.
Ch 11 Successful Plan - DaoisthjLX4f6mthReplied to Sir_DoodCh 30 Eriri Spencer Sawamura
- DaoisthjLX4f6mthReplied to Primas
I can't do anything about it, because I use a translator, and I don't write in English.
Strength was classified into the following categories: Mortal (strength equal to or greater than a person) - Heroic (strength equal to destroy a city) - Saint (strength enough to destroy a nation) - Semi-Divine (strength enough to conquer the entire world) - Divine (strength sufficient toconquer various planets) - Planetarium (you are able to destroy an entire planet) - Gallactic (you are able to destroy a galaxy) - Universe (you are able to destroy a Universe) - Multiverse (you are able to destroy a Multiverse) - Omniverse (you are able to destroyan Omniverse). - DaoisthjLX4f6mthCommented
the Primordial Gods are invincible against those who do not have the same level of strength, but this is not true among them, for there are Primordial Gods who possess abilities that are fatal or even difficult to deal with. There is a strength ranking among the Primordial Gods, but this is a spoiler for future chapters.
Ch 1 The beginning - DaoisthjLX4f6mthCommentedCh 3 Regaining Memories
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a mistake, but thanks for telling me, I'll fix things[img=recommend]
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