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McCarlton_Tezeno

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  • McCarlton_Tezeno
    McCarlton_Tezeno16d
    Commented

    About time!

    Ch 908 Get Out Of My City
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    My Werewolf System
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  • McCarlton_Tezeno
    McCarlton_Tezeno16d
    Replied to DarkShadowBlaze

    Luck?

    Ch 905 Sin Is A King (Part 2)
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  • McCarlton_Tezeno
    McCarlton_Tezeno17d
    Replied to Anubesetesh

    Get over the fact that this novel’s editing is horrible

    She paused her steps. "Well we can discuss when we get to the place you will be staying." She continued waking.
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  • McCarlton_Tezeno
    McCarlton_Tezeno19d
    Replied to Anubesetesh

    You don't like a lot!

    "Don't worry, like always, he will see the reason for my actions. And even if he comes to hate me, I must still fufill what I have set to do, I must honor my promise to my wife at all cost." Terron said, his eye shined with conviction.
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  • McCarlton_Tezeno
    McCarlton_Tezeno20d
    Commented

    Author you keep mentioning your other book Soul Weaver death tae but I can not find it on web novel at all

    Ch 185 Scarlax part 4
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  • McCarlton_Tezeno
    McCarlton_Tezeno22d
    Commented

    Waste of a chapter and and editing before releasree could be nice

    Ch 175 Nathan stays leader
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  • McCarlton_Tezeno
    McCarlton_Tezeno23d
    Replied to DarkShadowBlaze

    What?? MSD?? Blake???

    Ch 901 A 4 Star Altered
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  • McCarlton_Tezeno
    McCarlton_Tezeno25d
    Commented

    Get over it please

    Ch 895 White Rose Panic
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  • McCarlton_Tezeno
    McCarlton_Tezeno30d
    Commented

    Devour this she/he please!

    Ch 139 Married to Orion part 1
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  • McCarlton_Tezeno
    McCarlton_Tezeno30d
    Commented

    The story is great honestly if only edited but it would be even better

    Ch 124 Death of Simon and Lily
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  • McCarlton_Tezeno
    McCarlton_Tezeno30d
    Commented

    Security check=Boring!

    Ch 111 Security check 2
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  • McCarlton_Tezeno
    McCarlton_Tezeno1mth
    Commented

    To sit not seat!

    Ch 101 Breakfast in bed
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  • McCarlton_Tezeno
    McCarlton_Tezeno1mth
    Replied to Anubesetesh

    😅😅😅

    "I feel really bad, I want to be able to make them both win, but that's not possible, I am not one for polygamy, and it's already going to be hard with Lily and her unstable emotions."
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  • McCarlton_Tezeno
    McCarlton_Tezeno1mth
    Commented

    The story is good but the spelling and grammar are horrible! Hire an editor please!

    Ch 87 Trial
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  • McCarlton_Tezeno
    McCarlton_Tezeno1mth
    Commented

    Arthur, where were you educated???

    Ch 73 One eyed piece of shit p2
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  • McCarlton_Tezeno
    McCarlton_Tezeno1mth
    Commented

    You keep leaving mnessages at the end of each chapter saying full editing is ogoing. Well your editing sucks! Spelling and grammar mistakes make this an awful reading experience. You should have edited first before publishing!

    Ch 65 summoning
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  • McCarlton_Tezeno
    McCarlton_Tezeno1mth
    Commented

    Arthor please read the first sentence of chapter 50! These type of grammar and spelling mistakes are all over thought you were editing?!

    Ch 50 End of Volume one
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  • McCarlton_Tezeno
    McCarlton_Tezeno1mth
    Commented

    How about proof reading and editing before you post instead of begging for gigs and votes

    Ch 30 Plot is Thickening
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  • McCarlton_Tezeno
    McCarlton_Tezeno1mth
    Replied to Aaditya_Prince

    Reading these comments it seems like the author doesn't complete the stories in his novels and characters get sucked into black hole leaving raders puzzled. I just finished soulsystem in the appocalypsesnd te main character Henry got sucked into a black hole. If this is the authors way of trying to get people to read his/her other novel I'm not going for it finisheda novel or just don't be a writer pleasp spend to much money buying calters fr this bullshit!

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  • McCarlton_Tezeno
    McCarlton_Tezeno1mth
    Commented

    So her try never gets with Alicia?the elves or dragons don't go back to there home world? Adam’s story just been over?! The build up different character were pointless Sarah and her sister didn't mean ch to the story too I guess…

    Ch -1 Author's Note
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