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Thx for the precision, I typed too fast and forgot to write "him"
Yeah if you're from the saiyan race and transformed in any saiyan form, when you fire a Kamehameha it teleport you behind the opponent, not to confound with Kaioken x10 kamehameha.
A classic truly.
*same mistake
Whoa, chill man also take a deep inspiration because you seem either angry or stressed, which might not be good for your heart. Also I admit I have poorly written this chapter, I was dying from the heat and was tired, but still it's not a reason to be agressive, but thanks for at least sharing your opinion, I'll try to not make the same mistake.
I mean it could also work, but then it might be perceived as radical
Raditz and Kakarot are an obligation but you can remove 4 of them, also I didn't plan it but Pump Daddy C is now a member of the Dream Team, thanks for the idea, and if you manage to know who among the 4 won't be present, I promise I'll be honest and answer frankly.
Ok, I didn't know that so thanks
n a way you're right, but they don't know about Super Shenron. Also I'm not sure about the extent of S Shenron's granting ablility, I know he is able to bring back universes that were erased by Zeno himself, but in another way Zeno was able to erase Zamasu that got his imortality granted by S Shenron.
Don't worry no hard feeling, also as a new author I have to make sure to take note of all critics if they happen to be constructive, in a way you can say it's partly my fault because I am not making clear enough for my readers
Thank you, I'll make sure to check it out later
Alex yes firstsly because he is a huge brocon, secondly because he always keep an eye on Raditz, just know that if Jason dies, he will get transported to another world and all DB timilines will be erased (it won't happen, but it's just to have a better understanding of Alex's character). Julia (Jason's sister) I don't think so, and if that were to happen it would be in side story chapters.
There will be "androids" as Gero like to call them, even if they are cyborgs, but it will only be secondary characters like soldiers, from the Red Ribbon/Raditz's army
I know you just want to share your opinion but... ouch it hurts a bit, I'll try my best to not make this book boring
There was a time where Chuck Norris wanted to challenge Popo, but when he saw him in person he shat himself so hard it created the Great Canyon
I mean who cares about Krillin, and let's say that I got my plans for Vegeta