Reuben_Kotila_1137

The storyline starts a little fast paced but , it evens out . The author has a good way of bringing all the Underworld storylines together

What about "That Time I Picked Up a Girl in a Dungeon"

The way you are working with a future Tony who was happily married to Pepper a harem doesn't make sense, however I think Tony trying to flirt with Black Widow and tiring to make sure she doesn't have to sacrifice herself is a great idea

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my friend you need to look into The Record of the Loddoss War and Rune Knight anime. Both are prime fantasy worlds with awesome magic

yes I mean if I am transported to HP universes I will take it all

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I get that you lost your muse. Personally I thought you were too fast paced , but I did like the over all concept of the story

That sounds awesome 😎, I think Baki smashing through Ragnarok would be great