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nevershe2mthCommentedCh 23 Betting- nevershe2mthCommentedCh 22 Football Gacha System (3)
- nevershe2mthCommentedCh 10 A beast
- nevershe2mthCommentedCh 17 Gainford vs Rangers (3)
- nevershe2mthCommentedJason didn't fancy the number 14 and ended up picking the number 21 as his jersey number.
- nevershe2mthCommentedStepping away from the ball, I turned my hips slightly, adopting an open stance towards the goal. Looking at the confused keeper, it occurred to me that Thiery Henry had yet to accomplish his legendary stature and, therefore had not yet popularized his signature scoring technique.
- nevershe2mthCommentedSecuring the ball, I encountered the lone defender guarding their keeper rushing to me. Following a flash of indecision, I assumed a shooting posture, winding my weak foot back to shoot. Successfully baiting him into attempting a tackle, I folded my shot, swiftly performing a La Croqueta and zooming past him.
- nevershe2mthCommentedCh 16 Gainford vs Rangers (2)
- nevershe2mthReplied to fat_gamer
Sorry for my lack of elaboration, I want to say that the time when he is only 10 years old, which ends up being a bit 'boring' to read, at least for me as a reader I would prefer the protagonist's advancement to at least the age in which he is in the juniors of some professional team, I probably called this rhythm wrongly, what I meant is that the fact that the protagonist is still 10 years old and is in his initial games makes it seem like this 'arc' will still take a while and kind of discouraging.
- nevershe2mthCommentedCh 15 Gainford vs Rangers (1)
- nevershe2mthPosted
The story is very good, the rhythm worries me a little I would like to see more the part in which he becomes professional goes to the base of a team and everything else, makes the story more dynamic and holds the reader with situations that he is familiar, but the story so far is very good and with potential.
- nevershe2mthCommented
He may have a skill that I got the idea from 2k, so he can hit more shots in the final minutes of the last quarter and in overtime.
A/N: Hope you're enjoying the story so far! Let me know some ideas for skills such as passive and active skills. Whenever the MC does a pack opening, I may include some of them and give you a mention in the chapter! If you're liking the story and want to support it, please feel free to leave a review, a comment below, or drop some stones below. - nevershe3mthCommented
In fact, it has always been the official language of the country.
One of the leagues he had played in his past life was the Campeonato Brasileiro Serie A in Brazil, and Portuguese happened to be the most used language in Brazil, so he ended up learning the language. - nevershe3mthCommentedCh 24 Temptation in Lace
- nevershe3mthReplied to Sphire1707
I understand what you mean, but syntactically that sentence says 'team that played the UEFA Champions League or the UEFA Europa League almost every season', do you get what I mean? The team is in a European competition every season, not just almost always.
This paragraph has been deleted. - nevershe3mthCommentedCh 18 Meeting at the Coffee Bar
- nevershe3mthCommented
In the last 10 years, how many times has FC Porto not been in the Champions League?
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hey man, that was unnecessarily long, I understand that eating fast food isn't that bad.
Jason didn't know about other people, but he could smell bullshit, a heavy stink of bullshit, after all, if so many foods were dangerous for people's health, then humanity as well as probably every other life on earth would have been extinct by now.