Nana_Nana_9209

very weird 1. he only asked for talent not strength 2. how the fuck he can have a body that works differently to the laws of the world without wish 3. How can you make a story with cause and effect relationships and the breakdown of world laws that are so damn clear?

you make an idiot MC choose a dangerous world without knowledge wasting the opportunity damn, you made me read a story about an idiot who doesn't know what he wishes for 1. born in lookism 2. for US age....(don't leave gaps) 3. perfect body + innate strength 4. perfect copy 5. full control ultra instinct 6. looks like..... (you are stupid to compare real life appearance with PTJ Verse, you can even adjust height and weight and muscles) 7. black bones 8. Highest statistics recorded in all physical and mental aspects from gen 0 to the latest chapter 9. have a company or legal source of funds (it's stupid to ask for money without adjusting the source and taxes because it's easy to trace, idiots think people at the level of CEOs of big companies and gang bosses can't trace the source of your money that comes from under the bed) 10. Make sure the canon world is only me as an exception, there is no outside interference, plot deviations, or other reincarnators there (it's stupid to waste your desire for help when you can't maintain the existing knowledge advantage) ban those flabby trash idiots who don't think ahead and think short by wasting 10 wishes, Sun On The Beach

Tidak bisakah kau memberi tambahan memanipulasi elemen pada MC, dia bahkan tidak bisa dibandingkan dengan Art. Memberikan cheat setengah-setengah seperti itu hanya membuang potensi pengembangan cerita mempersempit perluasan karakter dan pada akhirnya membuat mc hanya sebagai tokoh npc kuat yang unggul dalam beberapa aspek tanpa keistimewaan yang dapat dilihat tanpa latihan. Maksudku bahkan memberikan manipulasi elemen magma sebagai bagian dari manipulasi yang lebih rumit tidak akan memberikan kompensasi apapun dan kau hanya memberinya 2 manipulasi elemen dasar? Apa yang salah denganmu?

Hanya dua elemen, kenapa tidak kau maksimalkan kemampuan mcnya

if there were other reincarnators in the story, the MC's knowledge of the world would be almost automatically useless

even with having so much power, he didn't think to have at least the skill and experience of using it. the stupid type of protagonist makes the story plot feel too forced.

Nerf version of Kotodama Magic (Black Clover). Interesting concept, but I don't see how he can compete with a walking bomb, a guy who could theoretically make an iceberg, or a green broccoli guy who could destroy a mountain. Unless there is awakening, I don't see how the MC can play a big role in the story without plot armor, which would clearly make the story feel forced.

Nerf version of Kotodama Magic (Black Clover), Interesting concept.

Reed Richard is that you? 😮

I don't know why, but the unrealistic achievements make the story feel cheap