D4rk_Ghost
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D4rk_Ghost6mthCommentedI like this one
Option 3 - I would like a harem with Riveria, Haruhime, Ryuu, Aphrodite, Demeter, Rose and Yamato!- D4rk_Ghost1yrCommentedCh 65 ANNOUNCEMENT: Still here, just graduating
- D4rk_Ghost1yrCommented
+1
2: Lady Maria - D4rk_Ghost1yrCommented
Both, but just like that guy said, tone it down. Too many "invading" characters are going to break the story.
Or Both? - D4rk_Ghost1yrCommented
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1) Focus on the rework and do this new one afterwards. - D4rk_Ghost1yrPosted
I'm making this review after reading the first four chapters, and I can say that the story holds a lot of potencial. Being able to see a different Bell, not clouded by the shadow of Ais opens the doors to new things and different perspectives over scenarios that may or may not happen like in the novel. Can't wait to read more and see how it develops.
- D4rk_Ghost1yrCommented
YES!
Do I still have any readers left? - D4rk_Ghost1yrCommented
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They could see he had an athletic figure with well-toned muscles. His skin was a healthy tanned complexion and he had a handsome face with a somewhat naive. His dark hair and vibrant aquamarine eyes enhanced his facial features and brought his appearance up a notch. But, the most important thing, and the reason Lefiya had run away...their eyes slowly drifted down past the relatively toned abdominal muscles of Vahn and saw his companion. Even in its dormant state, it caused people to feel almost 'intimidated'. - D4rk_Ghost2yrCommentedCh 1 New Life (1)