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McCrunch1yrCommentedCh 1 Bad Luck Can Be Pretty- McCrunch1yrCommentedBad luck can be pretty difficult to cope with, particularly when it seems to be targeting you and no one else.
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- McCrunch1yrCommentedCh 16 Disregarding the consequences ?
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- McCrunch1yrPosted
Great read, was simple and easy to read and although there was a few breaks in flow, it want too bad. Mc was relatable which is good compared to most other mc's here this one was tolerable. World building was okay but it can be expanded upon but i guess thats epected with only 13 chapters. Good job.
- McCrunch1yrPosted
I have read up to the first 6 chapters and I would say so far so good, the world seems interesting, although sometimes the author would refer to the main character as a he and sometimes as a she, which confused me for a bit. The premise isn't anything ground breaking or new but interesting enough to keep me invested. Good job
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- McCrunch1yrCommentedIt was the break of dawn, the sun had barely started to rise and the streets were already beginning to be filled with merchants ready to make a day's work. From the old gravel road that ran through the entire village, came walking the slim frame of a young figure.
- McCrunch1yrCommentedCh 13 Deals (Part 1)
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Ugh why did I like this so much? honestly I don't have any issues. Even though this was a romance novel it had me on my toes the entire time I read it. Stories with such interesting sub plots are the ones that I live the most. Again I'm not someone who usually reads Female lead romance stories but this is has become in if my fav novels on WB. Keep up the great work.
- McCrunch1yrCommentedWith no reaction from Indicy, Lendon assumed that it was okay and then stepped forward towards the mazeâŚ
- McCrunch1yrCommentedA voice resounded all around her. The woman turned around but saw no one. She was not surprised as this was not the first time she had heard the voice, she knew it was an archaic*. Such messages were rare, but she knew it was from the oracle. The oracle was supreme in the Ant Kingdom. Many people in the Kingdom never had a personal encounter with it but they prayed and wished for things to the oracle, and one of such wishes was to be answered by her, but she still wondered why she was given this message.
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