Lawful evil but still evil

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter

I would say don’t force it but you could have them warp in when V jumps down with Jackie? Idk, I think Jackies death has to happen tho

Thanks for the chapter

I agree

This is pretty good so far. Thanks for the chapter

Bro? Have you read that book where my review says to stop romance? He says to Scathach when he already has a gf let’s be lovers and her response was “ok” I’m just defending something I think is stupid criticism. You said the mc was a simp because he hugged a girl who was crying over the dead body of a little girl…seriously man?

Another book ruined by contradictions and no storyline so the author and his incel audience can have 400 fictional girlfriends to sate their sad and lonely lives. I’ve seen the discord, I warn you to stay away.

The only good thing about this book is his fan club. That was pretty funny. The rest is about some wish the author who has never once touched a women, and likely won’t for the rest of his life. Incels your story awaits you!

Bruh. I’ve read your comments in the book and it says everything. How is comforting someone who’s slowly breaking down result in them being a simp? Character development in a slow burn/ paced story when there’s not even 10 chapters released. You just seem to be criticising for the sake of criticising. Very sad sight to see.

It’s great so far. I especially liked the fact you showed people who aren’t lovers or barely even friends can still be nice to each other. Something this site lacks in my opinion because “emotions make men weak” or whatever these insecure boys say. The only improvement I can suggest is to focus on worldbuilding a little more but then again that’s very minor considering it’s set in Skyrim.

So. How does that add to three stars when the only downsides you mentioned are either personal preference that holds no relevance to the book’s quality or something minor they can fix in less than 10 minutes? From your good segment that’s already 4 stars compared to the trash on this site imo.

Thanks for that chapter. I think it’s developing nicely considering the characters and world their in.

Author:

Degenerate filth. ……………………………………………………….

Uh. Good thoughts. Not happening tho because the deal was focussed upon purity of bloodlines and mixing their clan traits im pretty sure.

This is actually sad… I guess what starts must always end. :(

Apparently they do now. Or at least meridia will. Wooooo.