Review Detail of SwanDive in A Swallow's Path

It’s great so far. I especially liked the fact you showed people who aren’t lovers or barely even friends can still be nice to each other. Something this site lacks in my opinion because “emotions make men weak” or whatever these insecure boys say. The only improvement I can suggest is to focus on worldbuilding a little more but then again that’s very minor considering it’s set in Skyrim.