Lol nice comedy thinking author

Why he using eloquence does that mean he doesn’t love them?

Too much explaining on things that are far away from the current arc which is uneeded since readers tent to forget if the important information that explain on early will get explain again on the said arc

Good the mc is not hypocrite right now as he just being true like his old life being shameless and not trying to trick to get in the robes

Is there r18 scene yet?

Even if this is a copy of a some novel it is a top grade copy and i am not looking down on it cause even a copy can be good if some of flaw from the original is removed and renew to be something new

Good i just started yesterday and right now almost finished the free chaps i so here is my review First mc personality: the mc is shameless but not really beta or simp to a female, he smart and know how to joke with other female heroines and the interaction between him and zi yanrou is fun Story development: well i guess the story development is slow but slowly come together since there is no skipping since mc always do thing one at a time but the development can be said good because he doesn’t force heroine to like him using aphrodisiac or anything like that he just flirt with them, help them ,win their heart and the process is detailed and fun For me this novel maybe deserve 4/5 Maybe in the future i might update my review after reading all of it

Feeling fresh because of the change😙

I agree with you while he may be 16 year old teenager from earth that doesn’t have any cruel rules. But doesn’t every teenager have passion to do adventure and not being told what to do. i like his personality but being too soft on others(stranger) are like being cruel to oneself. He get pretty emotional easily, he complaint every time his women hit lightly or not really harsh but he just straight up smack their butt while saying some sweet words like comeon the women also have dignity like you, when he get new women and the women get jealous on his other girl he started to get slightly mad because he say he love them all fairly but he himself says that he won’t get any new women i think he said this when he made promise with his old lover. and yes the loved interest did stay like he says he doesn’t add new women but after sometime new girls join here and there which makes me baffled. As for training i think the other girls are more hardworking than him because some of them need REAL strength to protect their love ones or xuefng but xuefeng just straight up said `cultivation is boring so i want to balance while cultivating i can also play around’ like dude your women trying to get strong to stay with you and here you are complaining about cultivation. I don’t know why but xuefeng personality is childish for me like 11 yO living in 16 yO body. Like if in the first life he died what makes him think that he will be safe in the second life?. Well that all i just want to rant and your comment is the same as what i thought while reading the novel so leave my opinion here. Overall for me plotwise i guess 6/10 Harem 9/10 since the harem started working with each other to not get jealous over one another i give it higher rating Mc Personality 3/10 *** scene 7/10 Design 8/10

Sure the pill sect arc are worse because the mc think with his rod but after he mature he somewhat becoming more pleasing to the eyes and not naive its just 150+ chapters of being naive since the mc himself is a transmigrator and you can’t expect him to suddenly become mature and know about scheme since he himself is just a mortal in his past life. All in all for me sure the past 150 are bad but its not readable at least its good when he spend time with qing’er and after the intimate moment between mc and juan’er its becoming more interesting since the mc doesn’t just bed every women he sees and start thinking properly. So i give this novel a 3.9. Ps: hope the author make more novels since most r18 novels now only take all the women they saw and make them their concubine. But the mc here really tryna build harem where both love each other sincerly and its good to see romance in r18.

Is this dropped?