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Well, first chapter is solid, helps get a good grasp of the world. And one more thing to keep you motivated - readers love a character they can feel. I feel Elias's pain and suffering
I see. But if you have read it all as you said, lmk which places you noticed such things. I can't see the fast pacing and info dumps you mention
Well, I appreciate your honesty, but I want to know which faults you identified. Think that would be better than telling me there are many faults.
Damn, you're one devoted reader
Behold, and author filled with utter shamelessness *"The Shattered Realm: Forgotten Echoes" is my entry for the 2025 WSA, and I’m honestly just having fun with it! This is a story filled with mysteries, intense moments, and a few twists that I hope will keep you hooked. I’m still growing as a writer, so feel free to drop feedback—but, you know, let’s keep it constructive. No need to roast me too hard! 😆 If you have any questions or just want to chat about the story, I’m all ears. Hope you enjoy the ride!*
A captivating beginning! The first-person perspective draws you in, making the character's emotions feel almost tangible. I’m curious to see just how chaotic things will become in the next chapters
okay this stuff is intriguing. Love the intricate details on description
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