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Interesting so far from the difficulty of reading the story. However, it’s very very hard to read due to the symbols in the book that changes them into letters due to the code of whatever program this author is using. For example: there’s but it would be something like this. there&sorvs. The story need to be edited or transfer to a diffent program that doesn’t do whatever it’s doing with the symbols. I’lol check out the book in the future if it’s edited and readable.

Wonderful story so far. The characters are great. Each one feels unique. I always looking forward to new chapters. Seeing where the story is going to go. However, the new name and book cover through me off. I almost removed this book because I didn’t recognize the cover or the name. The new cover is definitely different from the old version. Same with the new title.

Shouldn’t it be: The following day, Moulin…. Not the let g. Unless g is suppose to be a nicknamed or something else.

Yolanda wow. Everything is about what she wants. Not thinking of the future issues. Instead how she will turn out in this story. Either toss aside due to her selfishness or will she grow as a person.

Is there suppose to be a word between his & the word and?

Been really enjoying this story. Looking forward for more updates.

Wonderful story. I enjoy reading. Only part that could be change. As it doesn’t make sense unless the author trying to do a flashback. The last chapter they had the baby. They were doing things with the baby. However, the first bonus chapter. Is about when they returned to the castle. The baby hasn’t been born yet. Only celebrated. They are waiting. Then the 2nd bonus chapter it’s mention the baby has been born over a year so far. Just feels like at the end of the last chapter about feeding the cake to the baby should’ve been in the bonus chapter since the baby hasn’t been bonus in the 1s bonus chapter. It’s mention in the 2nd bonus chapter.

Waiting for more chapters to read this story.

Enjoying the story so far. Waiting on updates.

The synopsis of this story really drew me in to start reading.