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A normal person who happens to have a knack for words. gimme a pen and paper, let's have a paper war. Daine Strong ᕙ( • ‿ • )ᕗ
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A beautiful read. I didn't even need to go the whole way to know this book would be different. The beginning, the pacing, the characterization, the world itself and the update stability are just a few of the numerous things I love about this book. The writers style is not the conventional one we're all used to seeing here. It's unpredictable. Its spine tingling. It's unique. A great book, ngl. Recommend it to everyone.
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thanks. I made the correction.
thanks. I made the correction.
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that's true. I guess I write like I speak. I'll deal with it quickly.
yeah, I just made the correction. Also, I factored in all the other B.P he had been awarded in the earlier chapters, which gave him enough BP to increase his strength attribute.
You mentioned the B.P in your earlier comments. I should have said this to all my readers earlier. I am at fault here so I apologize if I confused you. The system uses the rewarded B.P that comes from Major quests that promise a power unlock to increase Ethan's base stats automatically like it did in Chapter 105. Also, the same B.P is used to purchase the skills Ethan will wield when he unlocks a Protector's power. Remember that nothing is for free in this world and the system operates the same way. the protectors believe in Equivalent exchange and so does the magical system. Skills are bought in the system shop with B.P automatically when the aligning Protector's power is unlocked.said skills also automatically come with their own M.P so that the user can use the skills, else he will have the skills Without a means of utilizing them. If you want, I'll tell you how much every skill that comes with an unlocked power costs. there are three skill types namely; Basic, Intermediate, and Advanced. there's another hidden type there but its for the later chapters and will come to play when Ethan has his first evolution. (there, I said it. #Spoiler Alert!!!😂) Hope I've cleared some of your confusion at least?
He will get one soon. I want everything to happen in a definitive order so that readers can know everything about Ethan, his system, why the system behaves in a way, how he got certain skills, how he got a particular Quest and why he'll behave a certain way in relation to his system. unfortunately, my dreams are bigger than my 5'9 frame so I'm stuck with making mistakes and learning slowly from them. however, I promise to make my system the most relatable soon enough.
Ethan is immature and prone to make stoopid choices in the first part of the book. however, he'll grow in the following chapters as situations force him to.
So I explained in the later chapters why his B.P zeroed out. the B.P he recieved from the system were used to automatically purchase his three skills from the system shop which is already opened. I just didn't mention it here in this chapter. I am already going through every chapter that has the B.P mentioned. I'll correct the mistake immediately. also, the correct exchange rate for BP and skills is; 5BP = +1stat
so I've gone back to all my previous chapters where I mentioned the moon and has made corrections. you have no idea how I appreciate your help.🙏
Yh.. that's all true. but it's all in the plan. if you'll notice, Ethan seems to be in a rush all the time and barely has time to do anything else apart from train and go to school. I know I missed some good opportunities to capitalize on the system aspect of this book and I don't really have a good excuse for any of that. the only thing I can say is that this is my first time writing a system book and I wanted to make things a bit more realistic and not too dependable on the system. I'm currently working on a unique System for Ethan and he'll start interacting more with his system in the later chapters. he will no longer need to depend on only premeditated quests to get stronger. instant level ups will also be available on a whim and his strength will gradually increase, along with my writing quality. this is not just a process for Ethan, but for me who's a total newbie. I really appreciate your concise comment though. wanna be friends?
I'll really appreciate that. I barely have enough time to go through my own book due to work so I at times make all sorts of mistakes. we should talk at discord. I could make use of your knowledge 😌
probably must have forgotten. I need to keep track of these things. forgive me😐