I personally enjoy the plot development and the characters (the second FL needs more screentime, please)...and what suprised me was the factual details the author included, for example, bullets calibre, military base facilities, science behind a abilities, etc... Continue with this pacing of your hard work mr author, i wish the best for you and this work of yours...♥️♥️♥️

That passcode is like a poem ..is it a reference?

lol this is from wiki rite? searched HK MP7[img=recommend]

great chpter as always, don't worry take your time

Repair the grammar here please...it was too jarring to the eyes

really appreciate this chapter coming up, good job for your hard work

aw this is cute...but it's a bit cluttered??? maybe should edit it some more to make the sentences flow better

Thank you for your consideration, mister author. I enjoy reading the latest chapter. Truthfully the ML is a kind of creepy with how he acts about with te Lieutenant Lady (is she the FL) but I can understand that men, especially those inexperienced in relationships may act the way the ML did ...good subtle portrayal of human behaviour, i think. I'm waiting for characters to ship with...the soldier private aren or the lady lieutenant...hahaha...anyway good job as always mister author and we'll be rooting for you.

I know it's the limit of writing, but the author should try to use less of the character status screen written into the plot. I think it's quite disruptive to the reading experience. My idea is that put another section at the bottom of the chapter after story is written. And if need to mention it in the story, just write the important information. Good luck to you, mr. author, i really enjoyed the premise and the plot so far... [img=recommend][img=recommend]