I need MORE!

Good start! Looking foward for more!

Single love interst and nice start!

TFTC! MORE!

I just discover this story, and I'm need MORE! And I like how you write MJ!

I need MORE! And please tell me that you're bring a sexy navigator to kyle! And do NOT recuirt Nami! It's boring!

Looking good! More please!

Thanks for the chapter

TFTC, just make sure to give his right hand to show his...swordsmanship? and give personality to his summons if you can called that, to give more depth. beside that it's look good so far!

Option B for sure, 100%!

It's sound pretty intersting start in mine opinon, curious to see if teleportion is space mnipulation or something else.

I like the story and the direction of this. Look foward on where you'll go with it.

Thanks for the chapter! Just finish to read and get to this chapter just today. Ideas? I think I have few ideas for you: 1) Using one piece movies like film gold and none cannon movies to your plot, to even recuirt some none cannon people, If that's part of your direction in the story. 2) If the MC will stick with Nami, develop her much more, if they'll end up together, not rushing them, since it'll ruin the story. 3) Give Nami the thunder fruit. 4) Orginial characters to be added to the crew, with orginial backstories and so on. 5) Not recuirt any other straw hat future member, expect Nami if she join the MC, that will most likely happened in the end, but maybe to meet them in the future. 6) Get the MC devil fruit and developing the abilities with time, with how it's work. 7) Kill blackbeard and replacing him as new yonko, that'll be far more intersting. I Hope it'll help you in the future.

Thanks for the chapter!

Thanks for the chapter

I just finished catch up to this story, thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter. I really love the direction of this, and I really hope to see how this effect on the MHA universe itself.

Thanks for the chapter! Waiting for the next one.

Thanks for the chapter. This is getting interesting now!

Thanks for the chapter!