gabriel_vibrant

What a shame. The premise is good but the execution was mediocre. The author does not seem to understand characterization and this is especially true when we compare the inner monologues of the characters. They all sound like they were said by the same person. The story attempts to be a slice-of-life but unlike a good slice-of-life story, this one lacks charm. It reads like a storybook for young children. The story is titled Master of Entertainment but how ironic that it's devoid of any. A waste of my time.

The translation is fine. It's a shame that the story lacks any real depth or substance. There are too many dialogues, and not enough descriptive narration about what is happening. Failure to do so means readers are left wondering about the world-building. It's like mindlessly watching a shuttlecock getting pass from one side of the net to the other. The dialogues are aplenty, but they feel flat and lifeless because there is no distinct characterization. All in all, a horrible piece of fiction that feels like it's written by a teenager. The only reason why I read it was to obtain Fast Pass to unlock chapters. What a waste of my 10 minutes. 1/10

now how do I know the person who writes this is an Indian? 🤭

The premise of the story is interesting. However there's no depth to the writing. The prose feels superficial, lacking in emotions and spirit. And the characters don't come alive. What bothered me the most are the stiffling dialogues. They don't feel organic. Dropped.

Whoever translated this work did such a mediocre job that I'd rather read depressing obituaries. There is no flow and the pacing is off and the sentences don't make sense that it's clear to readers that the translations were done via google translate. If this work is a character in a novel, it's the trash drunkard that falls in a pile of dragon dung and then slips and drowns as he tries to clean himself in the river. And nobody would even realise he's missing.

I tried but there's no flow to the sentences so it's quite a difficult read. and there are too many dialogues and less descriptions. Too bad.

Ooh I was beginning to miss our illustrous protagonist.

Always with the grand entrance. lol