who would want to read a hundred fanfic without the hundred... °ω°?

Idk, I really want to rewrite the whole AI thing to be more realistic, but I don't have the time, so if I do continue it, it won't be with a rewrite. I'm kind of busy right now so maybe an update shall come next week?

I'll talk about what I found bad then about what I found good. Bad: First of all, the info dumps in the first 3 chapters are INSANE, 100 paragraphs plus of just listening skills and their uses, now after reading all that you expect to see them being used in a fight right? No. which brings me to my next point. Fights. They were boring, the MC didn't utilise even a tenth of the abilities he has, some contradictions happen that don't make sense which only serves to make the fight seem forced, for example fights he would easily win are blown out of proportion for no reason, I personally got very frustrated at that. He gets many OP abilities, then during fights it's as if he forgot they existed. Also, when a change of POV occurs, first person isn't used which makes things confusing at best. Good: The OG the writer added in aren't half bad, minimal to no spelling and grammatical mistakes, story development is great though forced at times, the chapters are long, the established world build is utilised well and you can tell some creative juices were spent on this. Changes: As the story progressed, the fights are still frustrating but the info dumps did get lighter. I would love if the author adopted the 'show not tell' policy, and train in writing fights scenes more to get better. At least use AI those fights really aren't readable. Do I recommend this? Well, make your own opinion of that and I hope this review/rant helped. ♡

Ever heard of , show not tell? At least have him use his skills in the fights, they are always underwhelming, he doesn't use his skills for all the hype that was put into them.

50 paragraph power up info dump incoming 😞

Well.....then why couldn't he have done that with ALL is attacks....

I'm not going to lie, this feels like it was written using chat gpt or something, if not I apologise, but nobody other than a 900 year old Sage speaks like that, especially not a reincarnated soul from modern days.

Fixed~ Thanks for pointing it out ♡

This is why I hate writing in first person, some dumba**es assume it's a SI

I mean, did you not bother to understand anything while reading, all these advantages are removable by evolution, as was stated, I know it's your fetish to insult everything you read from your comment history, but go touch grass fam.

I'm cooking up a new chapter :3

My first half novel-half fanfic. I'll be incorporating very much copyrighted elements, so yeah. I really hope you have an enjoyable time reading, as for why it's rated 5 stars?....Well read to find out. Plus I can't be doing my characters dirty y'know.

Weren't they all identical

This is one of the funniest shít I've ever read! The humour is golden!!~ While the power system is solid, there aren't any real struggles or difficulties in gaining Abilities. All his power is basically spoon fed to him. Not that I mind, but have him use his power.His abilities level up multiple times but us readers don't have a point of reference of just how strong they've become or what they're capable of since there are basically no fights as of chapter 18.I find the character dynamic marvelous, the dialogue amazing and most importantly funny AF.As for character development, not much but the chapters are still on the lower side so I'm waiting on it.The world setting isn't explained fully, which isn't really a bad thing since the author didn't do us dirty with an info dump we won't remember. I hope it slowly uncovers over time.Grammar and spelling barely have any mistakes if at all.I definitely recommend reading this![img=recommend]

It wouldn't work with the story's premise. The entire Advanced Preparation would be useless. I don't need to copy every other The 100 fanfic beginning. This is MY STORY which I wanted to have a unique opening.....great conversation

Yaay, new chapter 👏👏👏

I thought the other picture make her out to be a little young, so..New Picture, pick what you prefer of the two.

I totally agree😂 Give me some suggestions please~

Umm, did you read the next paragraph? I'm assuming you didn't 😂

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