i love the story and the plotline but the one I hated is the MC! she learned her mistakes into her past but he do that again and get naive again and he didn't listen into his senpai! 1 into latest chapter is full of naive MC but the story is good and there are many improvement. *Spoil about story -The Mc learned his mistake and then se learned his mistake again and she will said that she will not do that again *After a day* She got mistake again and was so close into death and she said sahin I will follow your instructor sensai *After a day* sensai said to put buy *????* like that and then the naive Mc will but another one and saying "I feel like this is better" and then after a hours they met a hordes and he didn't have skill like that and he bought a loser one... like that it repeated like a cycle...

Elliot: Dont give me bananas System: You receive magic banana 1×

ummmm maybe auto correct spell 'her' but he is he

He was boy do you see in the cover? plus this is not gender bender

Hmm to tell you the truth you can either skip or not in the chapter 1 cuz that was only introduction of story but you will understand more as the chapter goes on

I already fixed the grammar using 'grammy app'

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I am author of this story There was 1000 words per chapter so I can only slow down the update quality and I will make it into 1500 words? maybe it will happend. I can't rush the update becuase the story will mess up so I can only think the story or what will I write plus I have to correct my grammar if my grammar is wrong or not becuase English is only my second language so sorry if some my grammar wrong but the writing quality is quite good compare to other authors.

Well this Novel is well balanced but I am confused becuase is The MC is really a smart man or not... you know he hated human and now he loved human now becuase he has power? don't know I am just into around 100 chapter.

Hello readers I am the author of this story. This story will continue to develop of habit of mc and the side character too and this story has strong fl too but it will be late before romance and in this fantasy world there are many other world a high tech world a demon world many more. Please If you have any ideas write it into comment *ThankYou

a master piece for now there was no harem I saw or even simp moment the mc is cautious and please continue the story it's okay if there was harem but no simp not too dark it's was too hard to create novel that a perfect villain mc and please don't continue to be a righteous, simp, just picking a girl from saving and making them into harem you know? just like a Chinese novel the readers want are the harem you talk about is not useless one and there was affection and story goes on

Good novel and i think it was too fast into 1 - 11chapter there was so many like a years later months later you should not add many more because you are just in first progress of stories or it will ruined