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honestly the premise is pretty common but it is pretty decently written and could be the start of something great, looking forward to seeing more from the author

From the outset, the author immerses readers in a world where the lines between legend and truth blur. The setting is steeped in mystery, and the tone is consistently moody, evoking a sense of impending doom. The incorporation of sea lore and ancient prophecies adds depth to the narrative, suggesting a world with a rich history and complex geopolitical dynamics. The protagonist, Cetas, is introduced as a figure burdened by the weight of prophecy and destiny. His internal struggles and the enigmatic nature of his journey are compelling, though some readers may find the pacing of character development to be gradual. The supporting characters, including the elusive Aegir, add layers to the narrative, though their motivations and backstories are still unfolding. the writing is descriptive painting vivid imagery that enhances the atmospheric quality of the story. However, the dense prose and intricate sentence structures may require readers to pay close attention to fully grasp the nuances of the narrative. The initial chapters set the stage for a grand adventure, introducing key conflicts and hints of larger conspiracies. While the pacing is deliberate, it serves to build tension and anticipation for the unfolding events. The slow burn approach allows for a deeper exploration of the world and characters, though some readers may prefer a quicker progression. honestly a pretty good read

plug! just wanted to say a few things on what you can expect about lord of the seas which is a story that i've been working on for quite a while now - "First of all, what is this book about?" It's about the story of reincarnation of a fighter who spent all his life doing what he loved only to realize he never took the time to find his own people. Given a second chance, Lukas finds himself in a new world of magic and this is basically the story of how he frees all of dragon kind for they are heavily discriminated against in the world of Hiraeth. - "Personality?" He is a pretty crafty guy who's obsessed with winning. He cares immensely about the people around him like his mother and his niece. But he isn't so worried about morality and is completely willing to commit what is seen to be pretty horrible shit to ensure that his own people are safe. - "Is this MC strong?" Yes. But his opponents will be as fucking broken when it comes to power as the series goes on. - "Will there be romance?" yeah but quite a gradual one that will take its time throughout the story. - "Uploading schedule?" Rn I want to be post a chapter everyday because I think that is something I can keep up at the moment but I might miss a few days here and there just to make sure the story is actually going the way I want it too. In between big story arcs, I may take a week break just to take time to flesh out the story flow a bit more but do expect to have daily posts going forward. If you guys got any questions, then leave it on the comments below and I'll try to reply to them when I can! Give this book a chance because I can honestly say it is a pretty good book. To me at least. I like writing it and I hope you enjoy reading it. Cya! - Ryu

I do like this story a lot, holding a simple and entertaining tale that some will come to enjoy. though i have to say there are some grammatical issues here and there i really did enjoy the characters and their interactions here! you should give this a read if you haven't

hey! this is the author of this book and it hasn't been long since i started writing this book. I really want to say I appreciate all the reviews and support that people have shown, so I want to say thank you to all those who give their time to read this novel I have created! this is more of a qna sections, about the story of course about what may confuse you in the story and ill try to explain to the best of my abilities. hope you come along with me on this journey as i write a cool story fr

i think this is quite a beautiful story with an interesting world to go along with it. the beginning was both impressive and captivating and though there aren't much chapters, i will be here to read and invest myself in these characters! hope to see more chapters in the near future

this story has a pretty solid start, although it doesn't seem like anything out of the ordinary if you read on it really becomes quite entertaining! the novel's leaning towards an overpowered mc trope but i think if done right this can become a good novel, looking forward to more updates!

I enjoyed it immensely despite it being a genre im not exactly familiar with! horror has never been my cup of tea but this was certainly entertaining enough to keep me reading! it really does have potential, hope to see more!!

Reading through the story I do notice there are some errors be it grammar or it just sounding a bit off to me but I do understand that english is not your first language so I have major respect for you for writing a story despite the language barrier. I do think the story is quite entertaining and the plot is certainly promising if developed well! I do think the story would be elevated if you could use perhaps a technique known as show not tell? Instead of being literal, describe what's happening, what the character might be doing which would point the readers in what you're trying to convey. but overall, a novel with potential and i look forward to future updates

yoo big w. thanks for the review bro zonin.