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This fanfiction leaves much to be desired. It feels disjointed, with the author jumping from one concept to another without fully developing any of them. For example, the sudden introduction of Kamar-Taj feels out of place and doesn’t fit the original premise of the story. Additionally, relationships are rushed and lack depth—especially one where intimacy occurs only due to a curse, which feels forced and disconnected from any real emotional buildup. The crossover with Marvel is also never mentioned in the description, which leave me feeling blindsided by the unexpected plot elements. So overall due to the grammer mistakes and the overall rushed story, this is a 4/10fanfiction.

This fanfiction is a stolen work originally written by DarknessEnthroned on FanFiction.net, titled A Cadmean Victory.

This is a stolen fanfic from fanfiction.net, the original name of the fanfic is Basilisk-born under the author name Ebenbild.

This is a stolen fanfic from fanfiction.net, the original name of the fanfic is Basilisk-born under the author name Ebenbild.

This is the first Steven Universe fanfic I've come across in a long time. Thank you for writing it! I enjoyed the unusual setting and the darker tones of the fic. I hope you continue with it.

Thanks for the chapter