Nikita_Ragimov

... 13 years old? I was a dumb brick at 13 years old. Like I didn't know anything about life. nothing at all. Moreover, history. This guy is either a genius or he was forced to study a lot.

Well, this fanfic definitely doesn't deserve five stars. It's not that it's too bad, it's just... Empty? It's just a story about fulfilling your own desires, where the main character is... an asshole? Honestly, it's hard for me to describe him. At the time of the first half of the available chapters, mC does nothing but become stronger and make love (Like in porn) with his girls, whom he got in a few chapters with a small backstory and during half a year of timeskips. Overall, MC has no depth and the rest of the story simply doesn't make any special sense other than, actually, fulfilling desires. Reading for those who just want to kill time. No more, no less. As for grammar - read the first chapters and you'll understand everything. And yes, if you take away the powers of the current MC and leave him with average abilities within the Verse - he will be an absolutely gray and semi-intelligent background character, created exclusively for funny inserts. I think that's all.

Крепись. Даже не знаю что тут писать. Терять близких ВСЕГДА больно. Просто надеюсь, что тебе станет лучше.

Read first chapter - you understand why 1 star. . –—————————————————————————————————

What the...?

So far I have read 23 chapters and I cannot help but say that the whole story is similar in structure to another Chinese fantasy. A very cool beginning dies with each subsequent chapter. The main character is Genius Again. Initially, he was cast as a Servant, but it turns out that he is the son of powerful wizards and they left him a ring with a significant inheritance. Local magicians, those on the human side, seem much worse than demons. They will simply kill you or eat you, and the magicians will literally turn you into a guinea pig or fertilizer. Well, they're also assholes. In general, there is no desire to fight for such humanity. Overall, I'm not sure what I want to read next. Maybe later.

Не, мне повезло знать английский на достаточном уровне, чтобы читать. Хотя я периодически пользуюсь переводчиком, так как я не настолько хорош как хотелось бы...

Well, I’m certainly not much of a freedom fighter. I myself am from Russia and here nepotism is usually hidden and in general you can easily take a good position if you have brains and a little luck. so I just don’t know what to write here except to wish you good luck and health. Stay strong. And as my grandfather said - “The old will decay and become a thing of the past, so you fool need to create something new...” (I hope I translated it correctly into English)

No no no, if writing becomes unbearable, take a break. I love this story, but if working on it is harmful to your health, then I would prefer that you rest. It's okay to overstep yourself from time to time. But you need to do this first of all for YOURSELF and nothing else. Otherwise, it will feel like a toxic relationship with yourself. (There are lessons to be learned from this, but the cost is not always worth it) So write what you like, how you like and with a sense of your own style. Love yourself and your story and I'm sure you will be proud of the outcome and NOT cause yourself any long term damage. God I talk a lot) I just wanted to say - Continue at your own pace and thank you for your efforts. ;)

I will continue to leave my stones here. Maybe not every day, but often. Why? Because I DO NOT UNDERSTAND why such a high-quality story does not have an equally high income of stones, while stories like “I was reborn into a beetle and became invincible, although I am a weak-willed piece of a man” are gaining popularity! and I understand that this story is updated quite slowly, but the quality is worth it! At least leave stones while you read the work already done - there are a lot of words in there! In general, good luck and all the best to the Author and those who return to this work. This fanfic deserves attention. And yes! Before I forget, here's from the new batch: