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Yes, I think you're right. I don't know why 20 people agreed with me lol
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Great story so far! I’ve read the 5 chapters that have been released so far and they did a good job on keeping me hooked. I‘m exited to see what happens next. The charcters are great, the writing is well done, and the sc-fi elements are both original and interesting. This looks professional! Good job author.
"watching life" --> "watching live"
I'm guessing that death in the SPs means that you have to pay to revive your character? I can't imagine that you'd die in real life...
Everyone's acting like doing 50 puch ups' easy. I barely know anyone (myself included) that can do more then 20 puch ups in a row.
As a french, I’m not ashamed to admit that I have never heard that word before in my life.
Ok well you deleted that fast… and I got signed out right after writing this. ?
Sure. I respect your point. Violence towards a child is wrong imo, and he had to resort to injuring his son because he failed at educating him properly at an early age. That’s why I said in a previous comment ´violence is the last refuge of the incompetent’
Edit: rep by pop isn’t the proper term. I just mean that it should be counted by what portion of the country’s population is sent instead of actual numbers.
Sure, but what about rep by pop? Countries like Canada would be much less favorised then countries like China since its population is much lower.
But you do have a point. It’s often easier to do bad things to make things ”right” then to do good things for the same purpose.
No it wasn’t. It’s pointless to argue over this since our beliefs are different, but I’ll just say this. Humanity has progressed over the years and evolved to become a much more ethical and kind society in general. That may have been the past, but its pointless to do ‘evil’ things because of these unethical medieval norms that obviously changed for the better now (for the most part). It’s like saying in an isekai, “imma marry this 14 year old girl even though I’m 20 because that’s ’legal’ here.” Just because its legal, that doesn’t make it right. :)
haha 2 years later lol. Yeah, I get it now thx
Well, I understand it has probably been 2 full months since you read this novel, but that idea was litterally NEVER mentionned… the humans from earth are NOT the ones that started colonizng other planets nor are they the ones that developped the technology to do so. If you read the next few chapters you’d understand that humans don’t all come from earth. I’ll try to make it simple: human civilization exists throughout the galaxy, and has been since millions of years. It was never said that the humans -from earth- were the ones who colonized space, because that isn’t true. other races also exist and some are just as smart if not smarter then then humans. Not only the human race exists. Spoiler! As they joined the (supremacy alliance?) with the extraterrestrial people, they naturally gained access to advanced technologies. Thanks for reading this “essay practise” lol
I don't get your point. Humans outside of earth are still humans... Moreover, the earthlings 'though' that they were the only intelligent beings in the universe, but it doesn't mean that this is true. i.e.: elves
Humans do exist outside of the earth as was stated in the previous chapter… Humans form earth are “earthlings” and these extraterrestrial beings who found the earth are probably mostly humans, just from different planet (they aren’t from earth, so they are still ’extra’terrestrial). Well, this is just what I understand from reading the first 6 chapters. I might be wrong. Also that woman was probably not sincere when saying this.