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NovaAias3 days agoPostedHonestly, this story really isn't all as hyped up as people make it out to be. Jokes don't land, the romantic undertone is just weird, and the King Engine is the gayest thing ever tbh, it's absolutely useless and does nothing for the story except to just exist as an Aura farming gag.
- NovaAias22 days agoReplied to ThePpp_Pppp
No I get that and I feel for him cuz he lost his mom to Auswahlen just like literally two other characters his age did, and there is nothing wrong with having an eccentric personality to mask one's sadness and sorrows. I honestly like his shenanigans in school and with Uryu and Ryuken and just doing things he believes is the right thing because he's a kid and probs to you as a writer for that because he IS in fact a 9 year old kid. But don't say shit like 'glaze' dude as if he is a 9 year old kid in the 2020s. It honestly ruins the immersion of the story of trying to experience his journey as a growing Quincy who lost his mother at the age of 9. So no the stars aren't how they are because of just mispelling Auswahlen. You can have the best story in the world but if you can't be bothered to spell stuff right or at least use grammar that's fitting for the setting, then it just ruins a story for me.
- NovaAias22 days agoPosted
Only read the first 10 chapters so a bit premature of a review but overall it's a pretty interesting story board. But for fuck's sake dude spell fucking Auswählen right even if you wanna take out the accented ä. And it's what? The mid 90s because it was about 1994 when Auswählen was used? Who the fuck says or thinks shit like 'Glaze me' two decades prior? That's just cringy as fuck dude.
- NovaAias23 days agoReplied to AlphaZwei
Lil bro you literally replied a whole month after this review when the story was only about 6 chapters long and clearly didn't show any signs of a harem otherwise I wouldn't have mentioned it
- NovaAiasa month agoReplied to Standy_Victorov
I think a lot of it is the translation that shows the mistakes of the original author of the story
- NovaAiasa month agoReplied to NovaAias
Setting aside the obvious Jalter in the chapter
- NovaAiasa month agoCommented
Holy shit idk why but that sounds like some Ichibe Hyosube amounts of bullshit going on, a head imprisoned and no names being said
- NovaAiasa month agoCommented
Tekken Tachikaze
- NovaAiasa month agoCommented
Tachikaze?**
- NovaAiasa month agoCommented
Isn't the Super part AFTER the Arrancar/Karakura saga?
